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You Wanna Choka?

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Winner is Desert Knave

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You may wanna choka the hostess before you get through, but it's really easy. Please try and write me a choka. I am re-posting one I wrote a week or so ago as example. The Choka is a traditional form of Japanese poetry that alternates lines of 5 and 7 syllables. Unusually for Japanese forms, the Choka can be a very long piece if so desired. The poem is followed by a single additional line of 7 syllables, called an envoi, which is usually a summary of the poem in a single line. With this form, the poem is in effect an extended Tanka, which has a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable structure. The difference with Choka is that you can have as many alternating 5-7-5-7 lines as you like before the final 7 syllable line, but the poem must always end with a 7 syllable line, plus the envoi of 7 syllables, so that the poem always has a couplet of two 7 syllable lines at the end. There is no limit to number of lines as long as they follow the 5-7 syllable rule until the last three lines which would be 5-7-7. Some of you may be aware that there are other variations to this form as it has evolved over time into the modern Choka. Are you game? Are you challenged? Let me see...Smiles, love & blessings...Cherry
Host: cherryk



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