|Posted on Saturday, January 26, 2008 - 01:27 am: ||
airdnaxela I only comment on poems that I like so if positive is because appreciate your talent if didn't like your write would not comment but as constructive you mean on form I don't know many forms even though been writing for years just learning them here in form over substance.
Micheal is very good at that and helps when he see's the need for help.
may life give you it's best, and you live life to your best
|Posted on Wednesday, January 23, 2008 - 03:44 pm: ||
ok...well when i write all positive comments are always appreciated...
but what im looking for more than anything right now is constructive critizism
not just "good job, keep it up"
any help would be greatly appreciated
A mask of sweet sincerity, a cloak of loving kindness. Meant to sway the heart to trust and fill the eyes with blindness.