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Michael .P
Starlite Member
Username: Mik3y
| | Posted on Friday, April 07, 2006 - 02:39 am: | 
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Just thought i'd share a few recent writes with you all and if you do wish to give any feedback, be that negative or positive, by all means do 
Mis-use
Her eyes capture the light in its worst state and i find more lies
Just to use and manipulate the day. And nothing changes, your boring its all the same
Not even cliche just mundane
Not very popular
No one knows your name..No one cares
The lies that paint the pictures you drew tell the story of my abuse
The brutal hits and kicks till you bruised.Don't lie
It really hurts when you were born with a tattoo across your head
saying 'Please Misuse'
I only need to add Manipulate and abuse
But you already know; Sticks and stones will break my bones
And yes words they hurt me. Your tongue knows how to cut me so well
You know it hurts
You know very well what you do
you always have
You always will
Please misuse
Please manipulate and abuse
Please misuse [You know what to do]
Manipulate and Bruise [Cut deep I need to bleed]
Don't rush, hack lovingly [True love is a blunt blade]
True love is a blunt blade
Hack, hack away
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One Night Stand
Today i woke up with the sorest head i swore so much i thought i would drop dead
And there she was right next to me, i must of slept with her..i swear i do no thinking in this head
Don't tell me, don't remind me of all my mistakes consequences ensure i know already
See that tattoo it says loser - I know I know
But its too late now I regret every minute i've ever spent with you
See that tattoo its forever
It says loser
You tell me I'm a loser i already know see its right here written right across my forehead
Drinking too much is no excuse and i never meant to hit you hard just enough to laugh
and fall down, this is how i deal with my depression
I hurt people don't feel too special
It won't always be you
See that tattoo it says loser - I know I know
But its too late now I regret every minute i've ever spent with you
See that tattoo its forever
It says loser
It says loser like it knows exactly what i'll do next
Im sure it does because i went back to see you
See that tattoo it says loser - I know I know
But its too late now I regret every minute i've ever spent with you
See that tattoo its forever
It says loser
It says loser
It says resol in the mirror above her bed
Its dead right again
Resol
Resol
I got out to see
I'm a loser again
Resol
Resol
See that tattoo it says loser - I know I know
But its too late now I regret every minute i've ever spent with you
See that tattoo its forever
It says loser
It says loser
It says resol in the mirror above her bed
Its dead right again
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I Like You Too}
I just dont click
If we did I'd make an excuse
I'd be able to hurt and love too
But honestly I can't see any pain with you
You're too kind
Thats too good a life
Break me down
and then say you love me
Tell me you'd like to dance
I suck at romantic things and I don't dance
But ask me to hurt and make a fool of myself
And I will
I'd do it all for you
I like the idea of it liking to like
But I don't feel anything authentic in your vibe
Its not you its me
Another unforgetable line
Not too far out of reach
Its only me
You and I
And I in you
You in I and I in you
Cliche to every inch of my life
Girl get in line
Its only me
Its only me
and you
Its only me
You and I
And I in you
You in I and I in you
Its only me
Only, only me
Its only me
And you
Alone and blue
Its only me
Alone
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Screams Of MY Heart
Screams of my heart
Start when you touch me there
Don't don't
I'm overwhelmed with fear
Screams of my heart
Do you hear them love
Do you hear them warn you
Before you get carried away
I don't trust anyone
I cannot love anyone
If i do not love myself
And i don't, i don't!
You cant help me escape from this hell
I've built
Concrete walls
Reinforced them with lies
There is no penetrating this nut shell
Listen to the screams tonight
Screams of my heart
Terrified
Screams of my heart
Start when you touch me there
Don't don't
I'm overwhelmed with fear
Screams of my heart
Do you hear them love
Do you hear them warn you
Before you get carried away
(Message edited by mik3y on April 07, 2006)
Michael william James
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maria kontaxis
Starlite Member
Username: Mck
| | Posted on Friday, April 07, 2006 - 08:10 am: |
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I'm glad I'm reading some of your stuff, my brain is astounded . I will not use like , don't like but some will stay forever in my mind.
Loud is good in writing as it sticks to minds.
Anyway I am amateur. Curtains I design, but if my computer was the size of a book I would take all 371 poems to work with me and read them. |
Michael .P
Starlite Member
Username: Mik3y
| | Posted on Friday, April 07, 2006 - 09:19 am: |
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Heh well thankyou for taking the time out to read them..i unfortunately looked for poems under Maria Kontaxis but have now realised your poems are under the username "Mck" so i will now try again, cheers
MiCk.
Michael william James
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tempered_moon
Starlite Member
Username: Tempered_moon
| | Posted on Thursday, April 20, 2006 - 01:27 pm: |
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HeY! I think your stuff rocks these songs are wonderful |
Pam Schwetz
Starlite Member
Username: Pamschwetz
| | Posted on Thursday, April 20, 2006 - 05:14 pm: |
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Very interesting now if we could hear the tunes too...hmmmm....thanks for sharing....pam
www.postpoems.com/members/pamschwetz
www.myspace.com/pamschwetz
www.geocities.com/pamschwetz/pamschwetz.html
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