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bobie (Vanillakiss)
Starlite Member
Username: Vanillakiss
| | Posted on Sunday, May 23, 2004 - 11:44 pm: | 
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http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/84/poem_635030.html |
Monet (Unregistered Guest)
Starlite Guest
| | Posted on Tuesday, June 15, 2004 - 10:01 pm: |
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Sweetie,
If I may say so... you are very talented. You are TRULY DEEP... you write straight from your heart and that is a gift. Don't ever let that go and don't get too haughty because then it becomes fake. I loved your song. I've been there so I can relate. |
Brittany (Mourning_dove)
Starlite Member
Username: Mourning_dove
| | Posted on Sunday, July 11, 2004 - 10:48 am: |
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you're song is so great. I love it. |
Janice L Dryer (Tears_of_hope)
Starlite Member
Username: Tears_of_hope
| | Posted on Thursday, January 13, 2005 - 03:15 am: |
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Songs with feeling behind then are the best of all. You are a really talented writer....I would love to read more of you songs if u don't mind....I love it |
M. T. Saenz (Mt_paridice)
Starlite Member
Username: Mt_paridice
| | Posted on Monday, February 28, 2005 - 11:21 pm: |
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Maybe it was the way it was read to me but I couldn't feel any sense of rhythm to your words.
It was a decent poem though so I'll give you that. |
Heather (Lawlesslorraine)
Starlite Member
Username: Lawlesslorraine
| | Posted on Tuesday, April 26, 2005 - 10:20 am: |
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its a great concept but i cant get the beat, and in some sense's i dont knw why i think u held back alittle, i mean im not the greatest song writer myself.
i see you got talent tho, and maybe if u can record it and put a sound file on here it would be easyier to see the beat
to stomp out hate...is to also stomp out desire
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