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Sharon Evachewski (Babyprincess24)
Starlite Member
Username: Babyprincess24
| | Posted on Tuesday, August 24, 2004 - 12:25 pm: | 
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Hey all you song writer out there.
I was sitting down at the table when this came to me.
"Standing in the rain
Looking for something to ease my pain"
It's a start of something.
If you have anymore ideas PLEASE SEND TO ME
THAnk you. |
margie (Starwest76645)
Starlite Member
Username: Starwest76645
| | Posted on Tuesday, August 24, 2004 - 12:37 pm: |
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Dont know why but I thought you would call
You never called left me with nothin at all
So I stand here in this rain so numb for your love all I feel is the pain
So rain drops keep falling cover these tears in my eyes
cover them with rain drops the best of discise |
Sharon Evachewski (Babyprincess24)
Starlite Member
Username: Babyprincess24
| | Posted on Tuesday, August 24, 2004 - 01:08 pm: |
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Thank you margie for that.
Do you have MSN Messenger?
maybe if we put our heads together we could write a Really good song together.
I'll give you the credit for helping me write this song.
Thanks |
Michael .P (Mik3y)
Starlite Member
Username: Mik3y
| | Posted on Thursday, August 26, 2004 - 02:39 am: |
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Standing in the rain
Looking for something to ease my pain
Find reason in lesson but it still all looks the same
and she wanders around unpleasant crossing her toes for a few
a few dirty looks from you
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Michael .P (Mik3y)
Starlite Member
Username: Mik3y
| | Posted on Thursday, August 26, 2004 - 03:15 am: |
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Hey again, i played around with my continuation some more, so here this is for you sharon my end result
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/87/poem_662981.html |
Mark R. (Bassofk9)
Starlite Member
Username: Bassofk9
| | Posted on Sunday, October 31, 2004 - 08:30 am: |
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It is a nice start. i added some lyrics u could use.
Cause the tought of your heart,
Makes me wana break apart from the world....
And i know your seeing him,
Makes the future look dim from here....
Girl...Girl im missin you so much.... |
connors (Connors)
Starlite Member
Username: Connors
| | Posted on Thursday, December 09, 2004 - 02:00 am: |
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Are you writing lyric's to country music?
Do you sing or play an instrument?
I can help with lyric's, but I don't know
what you are reaching for?
I am from GA.
connors
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jeffery c savage (Jetro262)
Starlite Member
Username: Jetro262
| | Posted on Thursday, March 03, 2005 - 12:02 am: |
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as my heart breaks
life without her just aint the same
i know neither of us are to blame
but this is driving me insane
i wanna catch a fast train
so with her my memory is not the only remains
of our past
its just not a fast burning flame
but one ment to last
im still her for her as the days go by
standing here wanting to cry
but i gotta be strong
cause i know it wont be long
til im her man
i know this isnt eteched in sand
but carved in stone
with one another is where we belong
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latifa teague (Unregistered Guest)
Starlite Guest
| | Posted on Thursday, April 28, 2005 - 08:56 am: |
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standing in the rain slowly going insane looking for something to ease my pain
i need a drink cant seem to think unless i think about you
baby i never meant to hurt you all i want to do is prove my love is true tell me just tell me what i got to do to get out the rain and back in with you |
