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Caspertweet
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Username: Caspertweet

Posted on Tuesday, June 13, 2006 - 11:34 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
I like it. Makes me think of tear drops or rain drops. It makes you think and poems that make someone think are always good poems.
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P_kimani
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Posted on Tuesday, June 13, 2006 - 08:58 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
hi there. just got recommended this site. ive got a little rant that came to mind on my way home last weekend and thought id share it;

Tiny droplets
blissfully unaware
You created every one
not a single one a stray

Will I ever see?

Can I begin to comprehend

Why you created me?

a droplet

your friend.

PLease let me know what you think.
Thanx
x

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