|Posted on Tuesday, June 19, 2007 - 08:50 pm: ||
Your poems are good, keep brining more...
|Posted on Tuesday, June 19, 2007 - 03:07 pm: ||
Hello Barefoot...I have read all three of your poems/posts. I would say you lack nothing in being a wonderful poet. You have a way of equating life with profiles of nature. I like that. It can say a lot about the ways of people. But my friend, if you desire honest comments on your poetry, you need to put a comment box on all your poetry. And do not hesitate to submit more of your great writes.
|Posted on Tuesday, June 19, 2007 - 03:44 am: ||
I didn't want to do this before, but now I have three poems here maybe it is time.
I wrote some prose before this - but these are my only poems (unless you count the lyrics to a blues song that I wrote for a laugh!)
I have had some kind words said already by new friends here, but be honest folks, if you think it is rubbish, or its meaning too obscure, or it doesn't scan - tell me. Go on you have bitten your tongue too often - now is your chance.
And no, before you ask, I am not a masochist, I just want to learn...