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The Pantoum Kingdom

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The "Pantoum King" welcomes you to his kingdom! This thread is a pantoum chain - I don't know if one has ever been attempted or not. My goal is that eventually we'll have the world's longest pantoum on our hands!

The premise is simple - I'll start by giving an opening quatrain for the pantoum, which is a stanza of four lines:

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
Line 4

The next person to participate will following the pattern of the pantoum as follows:

First line - repeat Line 2 from the previous entry EXACTLY
Second line - write a line of your own
Third line - repeat Line 4 from the previous entry EXACTLY
Fourth line - write a line of your own

Each successive post will follow this pattern, without end! This should be interesting!

A few things to remember:

1 - Have fun!
2 - Do not use this thread for any purpose other then writing a pantoum. If you feel the need to comment, please do so by mail. Do not leave disparaging remarks in this thread!!
3 - Enter as often as you like.
4 - Should there be two people who post using the same person's lines, the second post in the thread should post another stanza using the lines given by the first post.
5 - Have fun!

That all said, scroll down and join in the fun!

Michael
aka Bronze Dragon

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Jenn7
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Posted on Sunday, June 22, 2008 - 05:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Shadows of possibility,
have doubts tomorrow still a choice.
Dying ambitions final plea,
silence needs more than just a voice.
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C_steven_blue
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Posted on Sunday, June 22, 2008 - 06:32 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Have doubts tomorrow still a choice,
Open up, let's hear you sing.
Silence needs more than just a voice
and music relates to everything.
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Jenn7
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Posted on Monday, June 23, 2008 - 03:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Open up let's hear you sing,
ignore the setting sun's disguise.
And music relates to everything,
facing a shattered mirror's lies.
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Privatedancer
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Posted on Tuesday, June 24, 2008 - 09:25 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Ignore the setting sun's disguise
A new day is on the way
Facing a shattered mirror's lies
Just forget about today
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C_steven_blue
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Posted on Tuesday, June 24, 2008 - 10:10 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

A new day is on the way
To wash away all the pain
Just forget about today
And let it fall... let it rain
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Jenn7
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Username: Jenn7

Posted on Thursday, June 26, 2008 - 06:16 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

To wash away all the pain,
collecting hate at darkness thrown.
And let it fall. . .let it rain,
fight for division that has grown.
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Thursday, July 03, 2008 - 02:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Collecting hate at darkness thrown,
answer love knocking at the door.
Fight for division that has grown,
admitting feelings are no more.

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Happiness is a warm gun.
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C_steven_blue
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Posted on Thursday, July 03, 2008 - 02:58 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Answer love knocking at the door,
it's in the giving, not the taking.
Admitting feelings are no more
than emotions, not the logic you are forsaking.
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, July 03, 2008 - 03:35 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

It's in the giving not in the taking,
measured sunshine leaving behind.
Than emotions, not the logic you are forsaking,
much better to be cruel than kind.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Jenn7
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Posted on Thursday, July 17, 2008 - 04:11 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Measured sunshine leaving behind,
the level pain scaring the ground.
Much better to be cruel than kind,
translating words in vengeance found.

The level pain scaring the ground,
begging the darkness for last dance.
Translating words in vengeance found,
when morning learns no second chance.

Begging the darkness for last dance,
comitting suicide alone.
When morning learns no second chance,
leaving memories etched in stone.
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Monday, July 21, 2008 - 01:00 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Comitting suicide alone,
presuming enemy a friend.
Leaving memories etched in stone,
Nowhere to hide, cannot defend.

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Happiness is a warm gun.
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C_steven_blue
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Posted on Monday, July 21, 2008 - 03:36 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Presuming enemy as a friend,
He always had a way of sucking you in.
Nowhere to hide, cannot defend,
but left you deceived still, in the end.
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Jenn7
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Username: Jenn7

Posted on Friday, July 25, 2008 - 05:38 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

He always had a way of sucking you in,
never to know colors of fame.
But left you deceived still in the end,
driving rusted nails in a name.

Never to know colors of fame,
colliding in the heat of night.
Driving rusted nails in a name,
influencing blindness of sight.
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Wednesday, July 30, 2008 - 09:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Colliding in the heat of night,
December's frozen yesterday.
Influencing blindness of sight,
the melody of pain in play.

December's frozen yesterday,
tomorrow's possibliliy.
The melody of pain in play,
written with bloody tragedy.

Tomorrow's possibility,
chained to a hurricane's decline.
Written with bloody tragedy,
confessions strained from honest wine.

Chained to a hurricane's decline,
Destined to circle life alone.
Confessions strained from honest wine,
change removing love's cornerstone.

Destined to circle life alone,
hatred allowed to petrify.
Change removing love's cornerstone,
smoldering embers slowly die.

Hatred allowed to petrify,
Tighten the noose around the sun.
Smoldering embers slowly die,
empty all knowledge from the gun.

Tighten the noose around the sun,
embrace a waning moon's last need.
Empty all knowledge from the gun,
surrender to death as agreed.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Michaeldragon
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Username: Michaeldragon

Posted on Thursday, July 31, 2008 - 06:56 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Embrace a waning moon's last need
To once more be graced by the sun
Surrender to death as agreed
To the ground scatter ash upon
If you can't be kind, at least have the decency to be vague.
Knowing He Must Go: The Traveler and Other Poems by Michael L. Walker
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C_steven_blue
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Username: C_steven_blue

Posted on Thursday, July 31, 2008 - 07:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

To once more be graced by the sun
Fair dreams that you raised up to fly
To the ground scatter ash upon
The dreams that now lay down and die
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Jenn7
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Posted on Thursday, July 31, 2008 - 05:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Fair dreams that you raised up to fly,
finding romance another way.
The dreams that now lay down and die,
when conclusion has final say.

Finding romance another way,
temptation hopes darkness a friend.
When conclusion has final say,
beginnings must come to an end.
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Saturday, August 02, 2008 - 05:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Temptation hopes darkness a friend,
attraction never sleeps alone.
Beginnings must come to an end,
when only one solution shown.

Attraction never sleeps alone,
confessions never really true.
When only one solution shown,
accept what consequences view.
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Happiness is a warm gun.


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C_steven_blue
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Posted on Saturday, August 02, 2008 - 08:12 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Confessions never really true
Lies are always your chosen way
Accept what consequences view
Find yourself in a better day
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02l
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Posted on Sunday, August 03, 2008 - 03:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Cool lines dude:

Lies are always your chosen way,
Circles repeating same mistake.
Find yourself in a better day,
accepting circumstances make.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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C_steven_blue
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Posted on Sunday, August 03, 2008 - 06:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Circles repeating same mistake
Never take you anywhere
Accepting circumstances make
Your conciousness much more aware
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Michaeldragon
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Username: Michaeldragon

Posted on Monday, August 04, 2008 - 02:42 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Never take you anywhere
You must wile away the day
Your conciousness much more aware
If you only study, pray

You must wile away the day
Brooding on a line of verse
If you only study, pray
You realize it could be worse


If you can't be kind, at least have the decency to be vague.
Knowing He Must Go: The Traveler and Other Poems by Michael L. Walker
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Monday, August 04, 2008 - 05:29 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Brooding on a line of verse,
Volumnes of written Memory.
You realize it could be worse,
Meaning so difficult to see.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Username: Drauntz

Posted on Monday, August 04, 2008 - 06:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Volumnes of written Memory
Disappeared into morning breeze
Meaning so difficult to see
On shivering leaves of silent trees
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Wednesday, August 06, 2008 - 05:35 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Disappeared into morning breeze,
solutions bleeding harmless night.
On shivering leaves of silent trees,
fear testing which translation right.

Solutions bleeding harmless night,
Changing the mind of yesterday.
Fear testing which translation right,
alliance made with neutral gray.
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Happiness is a warm gun.

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Drauntz
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Username: Drauntz

Posted on Thursday, August 07, 2008 - 12:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Changing the mind of yesterday
Future will walk on history
alliance made with neutral gray
of Black and white's deceptory
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Saturday, August 09, 2008 - 04:16 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Future will walk on history,
coexisting pleasure and pain.
Of black and white's deceptory,
nothing but solemn scars remain.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Username: Drauntz

Posted on Monday, August 11, 2008 - 03:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

coexisting pleasure and pain
Addictive lovers fuse their brains
nothing but solemn scars remain
When burn them again and again
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Wednesday, August 13, 2008 - 08:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Addictive lovers fuse their brains,
One heartbeat shares conflicting view.
When burn them again and again,
Question if understanding true.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Username: Drauntz

Posted on Wednesday, August 13, 2008 - 12:03 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

One heartbeat shares conflicting view
Divided blood runs both red and blue
Question if understanding true
to answers pumped out without clue
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 12:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Divided blood runs both red and blue,
when sun and moon eclispe the sky.
To answers pumped out without clue,
surprise can be an alibi.

When sun and moon eclispe the sky,
conflicting circles compromise.
Surprise can be an alibi,
love found wearing hatred's disguise.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 05:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

conflicting circles compromise
to empower united axis
love found wearing hatred's disguise
writes letters with coded lexis
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Thursday, August 21, 2008 - 04:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

To empower united axis,
divide the powers yet to be.
Writes letters with coded lexis,
just for an instant victory.

Divide the powers yet to be,
seeping wounds of darkness still bleed.
Just for an instant victory,
ghosts of memories painful need.

Seeping wounds of darkness still bleed,
honest intent forced to deceive.
Ghosts of memories painful need,
what mirrors of midnight believe.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Friday, August 22, 2008 - 11:46 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

honest intent forced to deceive
shenanigan blooms candid grief
what mirrors of midnight believe
dream amended in daylight sheaf

(Message edited by Drauntz on August 22, 2008)
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02l
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Username: 02l

Posted on Monday, August 25, 2008 - 02:58 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Shenanigan blooms candid grief,
love always seen through perfect blame.
Dreams amended in daylight sheaf,
drops of forgotten ink reclaim.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Tuesday, August 26, 2008 - 11:44 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

love always seen through perfect blame
to frame her heart in correct shape
drops of forgotten ink reclaim
the game in long lost recorded tape
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02l
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Posted on Saturday, August 30, 2008 - 05:11 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

To frame her heart in correct shape,
fear conversations without need.
The game in long lost recorded tape,
protected confessions of greed.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Sunday, August 31, 2008 - 10:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

fear conversations without need
tear desiccates through broken fate
protected confessions of greed
are exposed in the fire of hate

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02l
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Posted on Thursday, September 04, 2008 - 03:36 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Tear deciccates through broken fate,
regretting wishes that came true.
Are exposed in the fire of hate,
chasing love across sky of blue.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Friday, September 05, 2008 - 07:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

regretting wishes that came true
Buried dream woke up with missing hue
chasing love across sky of blue
old rainbow has faded in fresh dew
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02l
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Posted on Sunday, September 07, 2008 - 04:03 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Buried dream woke up with missing hue,
claiming salvation's final price.
Old rainbow has faded in fresh dew,
refusing to throw weighted dice.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Rowly
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Posted on Monday, September 08, 2008 - 11:08 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Claiming salvation's final price
faiths' instalments overdue
refusing to throw weighted dice
against someone who knew
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Drauntz
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Posted on Monday, September 08, 2008 - 01:03 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

faiths' installments overdue
Empty check promised blanked view
against someone who knew
Shouldered cross passes soul through
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02l
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Posted on Tuesday, September 09, 2008 - 05:51 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Empty check promised blanked view,
falling in cracks of honesty.
Shouldered cross passes soul through,
recalling cyprus memory.
_________________________________________________
Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Username: Drauntz

Posted on Wednesday, September 10, 2008 - 04:18 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

falling in cracks of honesty
lying saved him from touching the truth
recalling cyprus memory
knocks the bell of mischievous youth
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, September 11, 2008 - 02:58 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Lying saved him from touching the truth,
believing heaven saves seeds sown.
Knocks the bell of mischievous youth,
regret what consequence has grown.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Thursday, September 11, 2008 - 08:51 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

believing heaven saves seeds sown
falling sky squeezed soil into stone
regret what consequence has grown
if remorse repents around moan
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02l
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Posted on Friday, September 12, 2008 - 04:47 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Falling sky squeezed soil into stone,
petrified heart mourning love said.
If remorse repents around moan,
forgiviness way beyond the dead.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Friday, September 12, 2008 - 06:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

petrified heart mourning love said
pacified life waits for body back
forgiveness way beyond the dead
until revenge lights up dark black
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, September 18, 2008 - 03:37 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Pacified life waits for body back,
helplessly watching moments age.
Until revenge lights up dark black,
treason alone will turn each page.
_________________________________________________
Happiness is a warm gun.
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C_steven_blue
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Posted on Thursday, September 18, 2008 - 06:56 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Helplessly watching moments age,
waiting for the change to come.
Treason alone will turn each page,
when at last justice is done.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Thursday, September 18, 2008 - 12:46 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

waiting for the change to come
colored letters burns on fire tongue
when at last justice is done
old heaven dances in spirit young
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02l
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Posted on Saturday, September 20, 2008 - 02:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Colored letters burns on fire tongue,
absolvent darkness screams a name.
Old heaven dances in spriit young,
voices from hell dream only blame.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Saturday, September 20, 2008 - 03:39 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

absolvent darkness screams a name
bouncing on buffering stone slab
voices from hell dream only blame
the deaf ear blocked out of all crab
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02l
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Posted on Saturday, September 20, 2008 - 04:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Bouncing on buffering stone slab,
love forced to sacrifice a heart.
The deaf ear blocked out of all crab,
bloody confessions finished art.
_________________________________________________
Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Saturday, September 20, 2008 - 04:42 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

love forced to sacrifice a heart
life simply cooked in burning blood
bloody confessions finished art
smeared again by careless mud
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02l
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Posted on Monday, September 22, 2008 - 02:42 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Life simply cooked in burning blood,
failing to translate deja vu.
Smeared again by careless mud,
blamed for the lies believing true.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Monday, September 22, 2008 - 08:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

failing to translate deja vu
giant shadow flies doves under blue
blamed for the lies believing true
neglected cage remembers soft coo
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02l
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Posted on Wednesday, September 24, 2008 - 11:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Giant shadow flies doves under blue,
beautiful raven sings alone.
Neglected cage remembers soft coo,
love laid to rest beneath smooth stone.
_________________________________________________
Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Wednesday, September 24, 2008 - 03:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

beautiful raven sings alone
By dried river of empty soul
love laid to rest beneath smooth stone
is paroled out to clean the poll
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, September 25, 2008 - 03:48 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

By dried river of empty soul,
emotions scream for consequence.
Is paroled out to clean the poll,
truth's subtle changes in defense.
_________________________________________________
Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Thursday, September 25, 2008 - 02:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

emotions scream for consequence
golden feathers sooth stormy sea
truth's subtle changes in defense
light's wings lift confined mind to free
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02l
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Posted on Friday, September 26, 2008 - 03:12 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Golden feathers sooth stormy sea,
sacrifice made with melted wax.
Light's wings life confined mind to free,
ignorant to deception's tax.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Saturday, September 27, 2008 - 12:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

sacrifice made with melted wax
liquidized hope drops sorrow tears
ignorant to deception's tax
fabricator exempts truth dares


(Message edited by Drauntz on September 27, 2008)
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02l
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Posted on Saturday, September 27, 2008 - 04:24 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Liquidized hope drops sorrow tears,
emotions fall though thinning ice.
Fabricator exempts truth dares,
fear must divide the men from mice.
________________________________________________
Happiness is a warm gun.

(Message edited by 02l on September 27, 2008)
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Drauntz
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Posted on Saturday, September 27, 2008 - 10:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

emotions fall though thinning ice
blessed crack laughs winter's prime death
fear must divide the men from mice
glacier koshers all mammal's breath

(Message edited by Drauntz on September 27, 2008)
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02l
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Posted on Sunday, September 28, 2008 - 05:14 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Blessed crack laughs winter's prime death,
knowing that circles never end.
Glacier koshers all mammal's breath,
dancing with naked truth's best friend.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Sunday, September 28, 2008 - 09:24 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

knowing that circles never end
blind folded mind traces logic route
dancing with naked truth's best friend
time twirls laced love to tailored suit
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Posted on Monday, September 29, 2008 - 04:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Blindfolded mind traces logic route,
when reason bleeds no purpose known.
Time twirls laced love to tailored suit,
creating triangles from stone.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Monday, September 29, 2008 - 05:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

when reason bleeds no purpose known
confused signal knits spider trap
creating triangles from stone
to close dangling cliffhanger's gap
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Posted on Tuesday, September 30, 2008 - 04:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

confused signal knits spider trap
reality is it's own cold slap
when reason bleeds no purpose known
weaving circles to atone
creating triangles from stone
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, October 02, 2008 - 03:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Reality is it's own cold slap,
protected by created fear.
Weaving circles to atone,
believing a crocodile's tear.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Thursday, October 02, 2008 - 12:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

protected by created fear
dormant soul dozes by black hole
believing a crocodile's tear
Arrogance endures shame's toll
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02l
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Posted on Friday, October 03, 2008 - 04:46 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Dormant soul dozes by black hole,
throwing away regretted name.
Arrogance endures shame's toll,
surviving society's flame.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Saturday, October 04, 2008 - 08:16 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

throwing away regretted name
Brand new clog walks old dirty feet
surviving society's flame
Dignity crawls under mainstreet
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02l
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Posted on Saturday, October 04, 2008 - 11:10 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Brand new clog walks old dirty feet,
ambition leads the lamb to war.
Dignity crawls under main street,
learning why circles must keep score.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Saturday, October 04, 2008 - 02:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

ambition leads the lamb to war
The sharp page has killed a dead world
learning why circles must keep score
Undone swirl shall not be unfurled
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Posted on Saturday, October 04, 2008 - 05:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

The sharp page has killed a dead world,
translating colors found each night.
Undone swirl shall not be unfurled,
weakened hurricanes regain sight.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Saturday, October 04, 2008 - 08:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

translating colors found each night
interpreted lights filter stars
weakened hurricanes regain sight
to eulogize innocent scars
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02l
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Posted on Sunday, October 05, 2008 - 05:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Interpreted lights filter stars,
morning sufficates waning moon.
To eulogize innocent scars,
destroy truth of late afternoon.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Sunday, October 05, 2008 - 09:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

morning suffocates waning moon
dusk canonizes her craters
destroy truth of late afternoon
twilight bury Quantum's traitors
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02l
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Posted on Monday, October 06, 2008 - 04:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Dusk canonizes her craters,
tasting the blood dried on a cross.
Twilight bury quantum's traitors,
petrified circles accept loss.
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Posted on Tuesday, October 07, 2008 - 05:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Tasting the blood dried on a cross,
communicated purpose sighs.
Petrified circles accept loss,
believe in honesty that lies.
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Rowly
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Posted on Wednesday, October 08, 2008 - 01:21 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Communicated purpose sighs,
words borrowed and repeated.
believe in honesty that lies,
the truth becomes defeated
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Posted on Wednesday, October 08, 2008 - 08:36 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Words borrowed and repeated
A tangled web is spun
The truth becomes defeated
The lies have now begun
...the best is yet to be
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02l
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Posted on Wednesday, October 08, 2008 - 11:31 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

A tangled web is spun,
fated signs drawn in melted wax.
The lies have now begun,
methodical confessions tax.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Wednesday, October 08, 2008 - 01:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

fated signs drawn in melted wax
Summer ruined the record of Fall
methodical confessions tax
Spring wind levies April's first stall

(Message edited by Drauntz on October 08, 2008)
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02l
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Posted on Saturday, October 11, 2008 - 05:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Summer ruined the record of fall,
defending crumbled walls of need.
Spring wind levies April's first stall,
finding a fool willing to bleed.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Posted on Sunday, October 12, 2008 - 09:00 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Defending crumbled walls of need
survival fell prey to revenge,
finding a fool willing to bleed,
self inflicted, placed on allege.

............hope I did this right?!?
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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02l
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Posted on Monday, October 13, 2008 - 03:45 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Looks fine to me. . .

Survival fell prey to revenge,
ambition grows an honest lie.
Self inflicted placed on allege,
forcing rope through a needle's eye.
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Happiness is a warm gun.


(Message edited by 02l on October 13, 2008)
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Posted on Tuesday, October 14, 2008 - 10:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Ambition grows an honest lie
when hangman's noose swings on death's tree
forcing rope through a needle's eye
blindly wrapping necks with envy
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, October 16, 2008 - 04:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

When hangman's noose swings on death's tree,
throw stolen silence precious gold.
Blindly wrapping necks with envy,
tomorrow's secret never told.
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Posted on Saturday, October 18, 2008 - 04:52 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Throw stolen silence precious gold,
emotions fall through thinning ice.
Tomorrow's secret never told,
consumed by numbers on the dice.

Emotions fall through thinning ice,
choking on midnight's newest year.
Consumed by numbers on the dice.
addictions shed a weakened tear.
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02l
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Posted on Sunday, October 19, 2008 - 05:18 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Chocking on midnight's newest year,
afraid of unknown destiny.
Addictions shed a weakened tear,
certain no possibility.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Jenn7
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Posted on Tuesday, October 21, 2008 - 04:56 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Afraid of unknown destiny,
united candle learns to trust.
Certain no possibility,
explain rebellion's secret lust.
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Posted on Wednesday, October 22, 2008 - 11:28 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

United candle learns to trust
To search elusive peace
Explain rebellion's secret lust
The power and chaos will not cease
...the best is yet to be
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Sweetfeed
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Posted on Friday, October 24, 2008 - 10:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Sorry Annie I took poetic license to 8 syllables for rhythm sake - forgive me) :-( ...:-)Apes

Searching to quell elusive peace
hiding in chasms of the chaste
power and chaos will not cease
picking the locks off war post-haste

Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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02l
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Posted on Saturday, October 25, 2008 - 04:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Hiding in chasms of the chaste,
temptation whispers naked truth.
Picking the locks of war post haste,
killing the innocence of youth.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Sweetfeed
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Posted on Monday, October 27, 2008 - 01:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Temptation whispers naked truth
draws swords, grown from a pocket knife
killing the innocence of youth
to boldly taste the blood of life
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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02l
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Posted on Tuesday, October 28, 2008 - 05:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Draws sword grown from a pocket knife,
committing weaknesses sincere.
To boldly tast the blood of life,
consuming love's poisonous fear.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Tuesday, October 28, 2008 - 08:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

committing weaknesses sincere
Inside a medieval armor
consuming love's poisonous fear
Smiles to the mask as his charmer
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Sweetfeed
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Posted on Wednesday, October 29, 2008 - 01:36 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Inside a medieval armor
hidden well is a mad man's rage
smiles to the mask as his charmer
wrought swords for beheading the sage
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Drauntz
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Posted on Friday, October 31, 2008 - 07:07 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

hidden well is a mad man's rage
Shaking his magma in the dark
wrought swords for beheading the sage
till wood handle shined caveman's spark
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02l
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Posted on Friday, October 31, 2008 - 04:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Shaking his magma in the dark,
conflicting images of blame.
Till wood handle shined caveman's spark,
writing alone by candle's flame.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Saturday, November 01, 2008 - 07:50 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

conflicting images of blame
Dilemma led life's painful crash
writing alone by candle's flame
Old thought was burned into ash
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Sweetfeed
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Posted on Sunday, November 02, 2008 - 08:37 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Dilemma led life's painful crash
seek the witch in the mountain cave
old thought was burned into ash
cloaking the weak to become brave
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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02l
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Posted on Monday, November 03, 2008 - 12:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Seek the witch in the mountain cave,
choking on superstitious fear.
Cloaking the weak to become brave,
painful addictions lie sincere.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Monday, November 03, 2008 - 07:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

choking on superstitious fear
dropping the broom to fly the bats
painful addictions lie sincere
trim the hats to feather the cats
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02l
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Posted on Tuesday, November 04, 2008 - 10:08 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Dropping the broom to fly the bats,
sucking the blood from common sense.
Trim the hats to feather the cats,
deception's subtle last defense.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Rowly
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Posted on Tuesday, November 04, 2008 - 10:58 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Sucking the blood from common sense,
the truth will wither, wasted
deception's subtle last defence,
the habit forms, once tasted
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02l
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Posted on Wednesday, November 05, 2008 - 06:24 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

The truth will wither wasted,
screaming to feel the dragon's flame.
The habit forms once tasted,
feeding temptation to a name.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Wednesday, November 05, 2008 - 09:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

screaming to feel the dragon's flame
in dream of Phoenix flying
feeding temptation to a name
The lure of innocent lying
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, November 06, 2008 - 04:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

In dream of Phoenix flying,
solutions touch the midnight sun.
The lure of innocent lying,
rebellion having too much fun.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Friday, November 07, 2008 - 09:53 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

solutions touch the midnight sun
Dearmer sleep-walks into blue air
rebellion having too much fun
Gravity swollowed their dare
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02l
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Posted on Friday, November 07, 2008 - 03:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Dreamer sleep walks into blue air,
emotions volunteer to die.
Gravity swallowed their dare,
shattering glass remembers why.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Rowly
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Posted on Friday, November 07, 2008 - 04:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Emotions volunteer to die
avoiding harsh word spoken
Shattering glass remembers why
transparency lies broken

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02l
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Posted on Saturday, November 08, 2008 - 04:34 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Avoiding harsh word spoken,
feed honey to an angry claim.
Transparency lies broken,
exposing secrets thrown in blame.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Monday, November 10, 2008 - 01:46 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

feed honey to an angry claim
Sweetened hatred sticks to smile
exposing secrets thrown in blame
broken beehive drops jealous bile
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02l
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Posted on Monday, November 10, 2008 - 03:24 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Sweetened hatred sticks to a smile,
Stone walls reflect cynical view.
Broken beehive drops jealous bile,
wishing one and one equals two.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Tuesday, November 11, 2008 - 09:09 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Stone walls reflect cynical view
Shaped thoughts seam with popular line
wishing one and one equals two
when heads and tails are both refined
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, November 13, 2008 - 03:16 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Shaped thoughts seam with popular line,
embrace the motives behind fame.
When heads and tails are both refined,
ironic consequences blame.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Thursday, November 20, 2008 - 09:54 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

embrace the motives behind fame
accolade the ego's fresh bloom
ironic consequences blame
night drops smart petals into tomb
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02l
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Posted on Monday, November 24, 2008 - 03:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Accolade the ego's fresh bloom,
red and white roses dare to dream.
Night drops smart petals into tomb,
accomplice to December's scheme.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Friday, November 28, 2008 - 10:42 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

red and white roses dare to dream
that most cursive lined summer end
accomplice to December's scheme
In bleached color righteous penned
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02l
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Posted on Tuesday, December 02, 2008 - 10:07 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

That most cursive lined summer end,
defining moments of remorse.
In bleached color righteous penned,
translated law circles enforce.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Posted on Sunday, December 07, 2008 - 03:24 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Defining moments of remorse,
isolation's captivity.
Translated law circles enforce,
the consequences yet to see.

Isolation's captivity,
conclusion written without rhyme.
The consequences yet to see,
believing love terrible crime.
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Darlene_hylton
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Posted on Wednesday, December 17, 2008 - 03:16 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Conclusion written without rhyme
Not knowing where to go
Believing love terrible crime
Makes my heart ache so
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02l
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Posted on Wednesday, December 24, 2008 - 03:29 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Not knowing where to go,
helping division sharpen sword.
Makes my heart ache so,
drink fated tragedy adored.

Helping division sharpen sword,
Helpless to changes blinded sight.
Drink fated tragedy adored,
feeding silence addiction's light.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Darlene_hylton
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Posted on Wednesday, December 24, 2008 - 04:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Helpless to changes blinded sight
Life's weary roads to travel
Doing all with all my might
Life's mysteries to unravel
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02l
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Posted on Wednesday, December 24, 2008 - 04:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Life's weary roads to travel,
misunderstanding written grey.
Life's mysteries to unravel,
death throwing stones at yesterday.
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Drauntz
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Posted on Wednesday, January 07, 2009 - 06:10 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

misunderstanding written grey
confused paint dried its own smear
death throwing stones at yesterday
itched words speaking future's fear
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Darlene_hylton
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Posted on Wednesday, January 07, 2009 - 06:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Confused paint dried it's own smear
Understanding blurred and mottled
Itched words speaking future's fear
Drowning within the drinker's bottle
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Posted on Thursday, January 08, 2009 - 11:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Understanding blurred and mottled
Psychedelic brush colored thoughts
Drowning in the drinker's bottle
Lessons to learn that can't be taught


(Message edited by cskpoetmuse on January 09, 2009)

(Message edited by cskpoetmuse on January 09, 2009)
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Posted on Friday, January 09, 2009 - 12:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post


Psychedelic brush colored thoughts
Memories steeped in subtle lies
Lessons to learn that can’t be taught
Will he perceive before paint dries?



(I am fairly new here. I hope I can post more than once. Forgive me if I blew it. )
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Posted on Saturday, January 10, 2009 - 12:12 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Memories steeped in subtle lies
Remembering truth he may think
Will he perceive before paint dries?
Or push himself over the brink


.....I just couldn't help myself..nobody came to play today....so spank me
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Darlene_hylton
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Posted on Saturday, January 10, 2009 - 07:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Remembering truth he may think
There's got to be more then this
Or push himself over the brink
Because of the love he's missed


I see no reason why you can't post more than once especially when no one else is playing :-)
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Posted on Saturday, January 10, 2009 - 11:29 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

There's got to be more then this
He shatters glass in the fire
Because of the love he's missed
He sets to seek goals much higher


Thank you Darlene!

Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Darlene_hylton
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Posted on Sunday, January 11, 2009 - 09:59 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

He shatters glass in the fire
Consumed by the rising flame
He sets to seek goals much higher
Reflecting on his life and knows he's to blame


You are welcome. :-)
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Posted on Wednesday, January 14, 2009 - 11:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Consumed by the rising flame,
love drowning in a treasured sea.
Reflecting on his life and knows he's to blame,
precious circles of tragedy.


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Posted on Saturday, January 17, 2009 - 12:40 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

love drowning in a treasured sea.
Sitting with pen he starts to write
precious circles of tragedy
his words now free him to fight

Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Sunday, January 18, 2009 - 02:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Sitting with pen he starts to write
His life on paper does flow
His words now free him to fight
With renewal his heart does glow

Begin each day with a smile

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Posted on Sunday, January 18, 2009 - 03:10 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

His life on paper does flow
He’s now free from every fear
With renewal his heart does glow
Blurred perception is now clear

well at least he is getting better
Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Sunday, January 18, 2009 - 03:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

He's now free from every fear
His zeal for life he's gained anew
Blurred perception now is clear
To his heart he'll now be true



Was starting to feel sorry for the guy! LOL
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Posted on Sunday, January 18, 2009 - 04:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

His zeal for life he's gained anew
His real work can now be begun
To his heart he'll now be true
And the gifts can be seen by everyone
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Posted on Sunday, January 18, 2009 - 04:58 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

His real work can now be begun
His future he'll now seek
And the gifts can be seen by everyone
Through all the words he speaks
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Posted on Sunday, January 18, 2009 - 06:00 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

His future he'll now seek
He's certainly paid his dues
Through all the words he speaks
He'll no longer need to sing the blues
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Posted on Sunday, January 18, 2009 - 07:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

He's certainly paid his dues
With a life of so much pain
He'll no longer need to sing the blues
He has his whole future now to gain
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Posted on Sunday, January 18, 2009 - 08:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

With a life of so much pain
walking new pathway today
He has his whole future to gain
speaking words he needs to say

walking new pathway today
tells the truth, despising lies
speaking words he needs to say
clearly seen within his eyes
Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Monday, January 19, 2009 - 06:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Tells the truth, despising lies
They cause so much pain in this world
Clearly seen within his eyes
Long awaited, now unfurled

(Message edited by c_steven_blue on January 19, 2009)
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Posted on Monday, January 19, 2009 - 07:46 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

They cause so much pain in this world
turning now, his thoughts to her
Long awaited, now unfurled
plans to win her heart for sure



Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Tuesday, January 20, 2009 - 05:38 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Turning now, his thoughts to her
He realizes she's the one
Plans to win her heart for sure
His search for her now has begun
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Posted on Tuesday, January 20, 2009 - 07:38 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

He realizes she's the one
Heart knowing that less is more
His search for her now has begun
He quietly shuts the door

Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Tuesday, January 20, 2009 - 07:50 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Heart knowing that less is more
Softly her name he does call
He quietly shuts the door
Before the sound on her ears does fall



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Posted on Tuesday, January 20, 2009 - 08:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Softly her name he does calls
in hope her response he seeks
he quietly shuts the door
before the silence breaks
EmpressPoetess
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Posted on Tuesday, January 20, 2009 - 08:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Softly her name he does call
under soft moonglow of love
Before the sound on her ears does fall
He'll shout to heaven's above

Is the number of vowel sounds supposed to be 7 in Pantoum? I counted 7 counts on most so I just assumed so...I dunno...Where is Michael to keep us straight on Pantoum...guess I better look it up thanks Cheryl

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Posted on Thursday, January 22, 2009 - 03:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Under soft moonglow of love,
temptation mourns concept of one.
He'll shout to heaven's above,
how many secrets hide the sun.

Temptation mourns concept of one,
divided happiness must lie.
How many secrets hide the sun,
when pain and pleasure alibi.

Divided happiness must lie,
question a circle's tragic close.
When pain and pleasure alibi,
provocative postions pose.
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Posted on Thursday, January 22, 2009 - 11:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

question a circle's tragic close.
in a quandry about this too
provocative postions pose.
what would transpire if me or you?
Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Friday, January 23, 2009 - 06:21 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

In a quandary about this too
In circles going around and around
What would transpire if me or you
In this situation were to be found
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Posted on Friday, January 23, 2009 - 10:43 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

In circles going around and around
seeking wisdom from above
In this situation were to be found
we're not too wise when seeking love


Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Friday, January 23, 2009 - 11:36 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Seeking wisdom from above
Is the same as looking deep within
We're not too wise when seeking love
We need to just let go to begin
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Posted on Friday, January 23, 2009 - 12:21 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Is the same as looking deep within
Letting our innermost thoughts flow
We need to just let go to begin
By allowing our love to grow
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Posted on Friday, January 23, 2009 - 02:42 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Letting our innermost thoughts flow
we allow the truth to channel through
By allowing our love to grow
Compassion in the world will always renew
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Posted on Saturday, January 24, 2009 - 03:56 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

We allow the truth to channel through,
believing honest lies have grown.
Compassion in the world will always renew,
hatred's demand that stones be thrown.

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Posted on Saturday, January 24, 2009 - 06:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Believing honest lies have grown
From tales that others have told
Hatred's demand that stones be thrown
Because of lies that now grow old
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Posted on Saturday, January 24, 2009 - 11:21 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post


From tales that others have told
embrace truth and choose to live right
Because of lies that now grow old
resist temptations with all of his might

Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Wednesday, January 28, 2009 - 05:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Embrace truth and choose to live right,
blinded eyes believing what's known.
Resist temptations with all of his might,
masking the subtle darkness shown.
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Posted on Thursday, January 29, 2009 - 04:01 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Blinded eyes believing what is known
Now open to all that is the truth
Masking the subtle darkness shown
Like life used to be in his youth

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Posted on Thursday, January 29, 2009 - 09:47 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Now open to all that is the truth
Once again the golden days might appear
Like life used to be in his youth
A genuine brotherhood could almost be here
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Posted on Friday, January 30, 2009 - 12:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Once again the golden days might appear
he will search a direction and find his way
A genuine brotherhood could almost be here
But seeking that will have to wait another day
Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Friday, January 30, 2009 - 03:24 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

He will search a direction and find his way
Leaving all of his past behind
But seeking that will have to wait another day
As he makes plans right now only in his mind
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Posted on Friday, January 30, 2009 - 04:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Leaving all of his past behind,
Trusting deception as agreed.
As he makes plans right now only in his mind,
morning attacks darkness's need.

Trusting deception as agreed,
giving a moment sharpened sword.
Morning attacks darkness's need,
shedding the light love once adored.

Giving a moment sharpened sword,
watching a mirror's suicide.
Shedding the light love once adored,
shattering promises that lied.
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Posted on Friday, January 30, 2009 - 05:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Watching a mirror's suicide
Looking into eyes with a blank stare
Shattering promises that lied
Not knowing if he could once again care
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Posted on Friday, January 30, 2009 - 05:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Looking into eyes with a blank stare,
submission to time's tragic art.
Not knowing if he could once again care,
possessing winter's frozen heart.
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Posted on Saturday, January 31, 2009 - 07:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Submission to time's tragic art
That used to inspire with such awe
Possessing winter's frozen heart
Can anything out there make it thaw
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Posted on Sunday, February 01, 2009 - 02:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

That used to inspire with such awe,
precious song written yesterday.
Can anything out there make it thaw,
convince love concrete only clay.
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Posted on Sunday, February 01, 2009 - 03:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

precious song written yesterday.
song sung special just for your ears
convince love concrete only clay.
this love song is to dry everyone's tears
Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Sunday, February 01, 2009 - 05:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Song sung special just for your ears
A proclaimation of love so sweet
This love song is to dry everyone's tears
Very soon my soulmate I'll meet
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Posted on Monday, February 02, 2009 - 02:03 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

A proclaimation of love so sweet,
dangerous eyes of quickest death.
Very soon my soulmate I'll meet,
conclusion's beautiful last breath.

Dangerous eyes of quickest death,
promised salvation given life.
Conclusion's beautiful last breath,
trusting temptation with a knife.
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Posted on Thursday, February 12, 2009 - 04:01 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Promised salvation given life,
hiding contracted sacrifice.
Trusting temptation with a knife,
offer destiny weighted dice.

Hiding contracted sacrifice,
speaking to love with weathered voice.
Offer destiny weighted dice,
leaving the truth no other choice.

Speaking to love with weathered voice,
listen to seasons change their mind.
leaving the truth no other choice,
protecting precious lies still find.
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Posted on Monday, February 16, 2009 - 04:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Listen to seasons change their mind,
ignore what circumstances hold.
Protecting precious lies still find,
believing information gold.

Ignore what circumstances hold,
pursue an angel's sudden flight.
Believing information gold,
consume tomorrow morning's light.

Pursue an angel's sudden flight,
return the tragic darkness thrown.
Consume tomorrow morning's light,
leave happiness to die alone.
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Posted on Thursday, February 26, 2009 - 04:45 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Return the tragic darkness thrown,
consuming mercy love ignored.
Leave happiness to die alone,
pursue ambitions long adored.

Consuming mercy love ignored,
confront late afternoon's advice.
Pursue ambitions long adored,
carelessly tossing jealous dice.

Confront late afternoon's adivce,
killing the motives of July.
Carelessly tossing jealous dice,
never asking December why.

Killing the motives of july,
temptation boldly voices blame.
Never asking December why,
choice always hides another name.

Temptation boldly voices blame,
mourning sunshine crying sincere.
Choice always hides another name,
behind addiction's final tear.
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Posted on Thursday, February 26, 2009 - 06:21 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Mourning sunshine crying sincere
Praying you can stop the abuse
Behind addiction's final tear
Never again will you have to use

Praying you can stop the abuse
A new life lies in front of you
Never again will you have to use
Reach out is something you must do

A new life lies in front of you
If you can surrender your shaking hand
Reach out is something you must do
To finally come to understand

If you can surrender your shaking hand
Many are there to help you out
To finally come to understand
What your feelings and your life are all about
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Posted on Thursday, February 26, 2009 - 09:46 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Many are there to help you out
Still you must also face this truth
What your feelings and your life are all about
You cannot simply blame mistakes of youth

Still you must also face this truth
Building with bricks of time's foundation
You cannot simply blame mistakes of youth
But must find your truth in contemplation

Do not speak to me loudly so that I might hear you... speak to me softly so that I might listen.

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Posted on Thursday, February 26, 2009 - 07:45 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Building with bricks of time's foundation
You must have faith and enduring skill
But must find your truth in contemplation
Not giving in to temptations that kill



Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Saturday, February 28, 2009 - 09:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Great lines one and all. . .

You must have faith and enduring skill,
helplessly watching fated end.
Not giving in to temptations that kill,
stealing what treasure can't defend.

Helplessly watching fated end,
concluding shadows touch the night.
Stealing what treasure can't defend,
Grey salutations blinding sight.

Concluding shadows touch the night,
live a moment of borrowed time.
grey salutations blinding sight,
believing in deception's rhyme.

Live a moment of borrowed time,
die for a cause will never see.
Believing in deception's rhyme,
intoxicated mystery.
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Posted on Thursday, March 05, 2009 - 04:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Die for a cause will never see,
live on in words possessing stone.
Intoxicated mystery,
parallel lines weeping alone.

Live on in words possessing stone,
tomorrow's wish to see the sun.
Parallel lines weeping alone,
slave to what yesterday has done.

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Posted on Wednesday, March 11, 2009 - 11:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Tomorrow's wish to see the sun,
Watch morning bleed what darkness hides.
Slave to what yesterday has done,
chained to the voice weakness confides.

Watch morning bleed what darkness hides,
the blindness pride will never see.
Chained to the voice weakness confides,
fear punishment of destiny.

The blindness pride will never see,
walking through tunnels to the light.
Fear punishment of destiny,
a moment wrong forever right.

Walking through tunnels to the light,
believing ignorance is bliss.
A moment wrong forever right,
sharing temptation's fatal kiss.

Believing ignorance is bliss,
negotiate colors of grey.
Sharing temptation's fatal kiss,
honesty has nothing to say.
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 12:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

negotiate colors of gray
their shades a flexible hue
honesty has nothing to say
but pays the lies their due

their shades a flexible hue
to bend to each man's will
but pays the lies their due
their need a bitter pill



If you can't be kind, at least have the decency to be vague.
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 03:46 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

A Sir Bronze, so good to hear from you again.
Don't stay away so long this time.

To bend each man's will,
apply temptation's subtle voice.
Their need a bitter pill,
when failure found the only choice.

Apply temptation's subtle voice,
finding deception turns the screw.
When failure found the only choice,
welcome fated vengeance pursue.
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Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 03:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Finding deception turns the screw,
we must each look within our hearts.
Welcome fated vengeance pursue
for within ourselves it all starts.

We must each look within our hearts
to find the source of the deceits.
For within ourselves it all starts
and after the first - just repeats.
Keep a notebook handy and a pen that's full of ink.
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Posted on Tuesday, March 17, 2009 - 05:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

To find the source of the deceits,
force honesty to tell a lie.
And after the first - just repeats,
contentment of a circle's sigh.

Force honesty to tell a lie,
convincing weaknesses to fear.
Contentment of a circle's sigh,
the horror creating first tear.
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Posted on Friday, March 27, 2009 - 04:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Convincing weaknesses to fear,
conversations with black and blue.
The horror creating first tear,
running from mysteries pursue.
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Conversations with black and blue,
negotiate lasting remorse.
Running from mysteries pursue,
throw caution to a windy source.

Negotiate lasting remorse,
destroy the promises of stone.
Throw caution to a windy source,
declaring independence own.

Destroy the promises of stone,
negative influence applied.
Declaring independence own,
remove the sword from bloody side.

Negative influence applied,
idolized ruins weep for night.
Remove the sword from bloody side,
submission to the fear of flight.
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Posted on Tuesday, April 28, 2009 - 10:00 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Idolized ruins weep for night,
cursing an independant mind.
Submission to the fear of flight,
avoiding punishments might find.

Cursing an independant mind,
held hostage by addictions use.
Avoiding punishments might find,
allowing ambition to choose.
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Posted on Friday, May 08, 2009 - 04:30 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Held hostage by addictions use,
scream silence to the setting sun.
Allowing ambition to choose,
conclusive damage with a gun.
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Posted on Friday, May 15, 2009 - 12:04 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Scream silence to the setting sun,
hiding within lost destiny.
Conclusive damage with a gun,
love whispers please remember me.

Hiding within lost destiny,
catalog choices blindly made.
Love whispers please remember me,
knowing price unwillingly paid.
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Posted on Thursday, May 28, 2009 - 10:38 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

catalog choices blindly made
image sank reality's ride
knowing price unwillingly paid
laughing page slaps dog-eared pride
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Posted on Thursday, May 28, 2009 - 12:28 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Image sank Reality's Ride
the poor horse lost by just his nose.
A laughing page slaps dog-eared pride,
gamblers bemoaned the horse they chose.
Keep a notebook handy and a pen that's full of ink.
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Posted on Friday, May 29, 2009 - 10:18 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

the poor horse lost by just his nose
for jockey didn't ask a lie
gamblers bemoaned the horse they chose
then honesty is bled to die.
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Posted on Sunday, May 31, 2009 - 05:10 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

. . . . .A dude, good to see you again. . . .

For jockey didn't ask a lie,
naked truth begging to be used.
Then honesty is bled to die,
vandalized horizon amused.
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Posted on Sunday, May 31, 2009 - 09:08 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Hi, 02l, how are you?

naked truth begging to be used
to wrap around a cheater's heart
vandalized horizon amused
when moon banded its shattered part

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Posted on Monday, June 01, 2009 - 04:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Very good. . .very good. . .

To wrap around a cheater's heart,
December's chilling chastity.
When moon banded it's shattered part,
yesterday screams in memory.
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Posted on Monday, June 01, 2009 - 08:47 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

December's chilling chastity
frozen soul desires deep warmness
yesterday screams in memory
neglected tongue swallows senseless
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Posted on Thursday, June 04, 2009 - 05:41 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Frozen soul desires deep warmness,
intoxication's shallow wine.
Neglected tongue swallows senseless,
perfection poisoning divine.
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Posted on Thursday, June 04, 2009 - 07:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Intoxication's shallow wine
Tastes so sickeningly sweet
Perfection poisoning divine
Coerces you to repeat
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Posted on Thursday, June 04, 2009 - 05:42 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Tasts so sickeningly sweet,
innocent blood temptation needs.
Coerces you to repeat,
drawn circles satisfaction leads.

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Posted on Saturday, June 06, 2009 - 09:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

innocent blood temptation needs
quenched heart sings on setting moon
drawn circles satisfaction leads
serene mind swings in purple June
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Posted on Sunday, June 07, 2009 - 07:46 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

quenched heart sings on setting moon
dark desires fed from blackend deeds
serene mind swings in purple June
to hell's gate this feasting leads
EmpressPoetess
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Posted on Sunday, June 07, 2009 - 03:58 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

dark desires fed from blackend deeds
dense eye grows out midnight sun
to hell's gate this feasting leads
broken bottle paves graveyard fun
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Posted on Sunday, June 07, 2009 - 03:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Dark desires fed from blackened deeds,
starvation of an honest name.
To hell's gate this feasting leads,
ignoring heaven's perfect blame.
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Posted on Sunday, June 07, 2009 - 04:08 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

. . .So sorry dude. . .

Dense eye grows out midnight sun,
mourning a waning moon's dismay.
Broken bottle paves graveyard fun,
predestination's final say.
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Posted on Sunday, June 07, 2009 - 06:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

No worry, 02L, always enjoy reading yours.

mourning a waning moon's dismay
Silent star pockets crying light
predestination's final say
fire and Jewel are both shine bright
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Posted on Wednesday, June 10, 2009 - 05:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

. . .Likewise dude. . .

Silent star pockets crying light,
Dictating terms of loyality.
Fire and jewel are both shine bright,
wearing the blood stone secretly.
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Posted on Wednesday, June 10, 2009 - 06:53 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Dictating terms of loyality
Diamond pierces synthetic heart
wearing the blood stone secretly
heap her beats on symbolic chart

(Message edited by drauntz on June 10, 2009)
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Posted on Thursday, June 11, 2009 - 08:03 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Diamond pierces synthetic heart,
seducing claims of loneliness.
Heap her beats on symbolic chart,
tracking truth's failure and success.
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Posted on Thursday, June 11, 2009 - 12:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

seducing claims of loneliness
pebble bewitched passing bubble
tracking truth's failure and success
lightheaded think doubles trouble
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Posted on Thursday, June 11, 2009 - 12:39 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Pebble bewitched passing bubble,
manipulated consequence.
Lightheaded thought doubles trouble,
confusion's intimate defence.
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Posted on Thursday, June 11, 2009 - 03:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

manipulated consequence
calculated feelings half well
confusion's intimate defence
garnished smile muted silver bell
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Posted on Friday, June 12, 2009 - 04:10 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Calculated feelings half well,
digressive moments analyze.
Garnished smile muted silver bell,
submission's silent compromise.
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Posted on Friday, June 12, 2009 - 11:35 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

digressive moments analyze
how broken hands stopped running time
submission's silent compromise
bending sunbeam grants wish to climb
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Posted on Saturday, June 13, 2009 - 05:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

How broken hands stopped running time,
repitition's required skill.
Bending sunbeam grants wish to climb,
mutual prophecies fulfill.
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Posted on Sunday, June 14, 2009 - 05:08 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

repitition's required skill
blinking soul turned sun off and down
mutual prophecies fulfill
reading night redeems future crown

(Message edited by drauntz on June 14, 2009)

(Message edited by drauntz on June 14, 2009)
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Posted on Wednesday, June 17, 2009 - 11:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Blinking soul turned sun off and down,
weary of blinded paradise.
Reading night redeems future crown,
rewriting afernoon's device.

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Posted on Wednesday, June 17, 2009 - 10:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

weary of blinded paradise
nap on a star with devoid wish
rewriting afternoon's device
fainted moon rests on angelfish



(Message edited by drauntz on June 18, 2009)
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Posted on Friday, June 19, 2009 - 06:03 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Nap on a star with devoid wish,
negotiated tragedy.
Fainted moon rests on angelfish,
submissive possibility.
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Posted on Saturday, June 20, 2009 - 12:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

negotiated tragedy
crossing through thorny memory
submissive possibility
bleeding palm painted pale history
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Posted on Saturday, June 20, 2009 - 02:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Crossing through thorny memory,
confront tomorrow's gentle breeze.
Bleeding palm painted pale history,
beneath the sword of Damocles.
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Posted on Monday, June 22, 2009 - 04:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

confront tomorrow's gentle breeze
open a transparent vision
beneath the sword of Damocles
probe an out of mind decision
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Posted on Tuesday, June 23, 2009 - 06:09 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Open a transparent vision,
Look deep inside yourself and see.
Probe an out of mind decision,
Meditate to find your own reality!
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Posted on Tuesday, June 23, 2009 - 09:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Look deep inside yourself and see
Interest grows above ego
Meditate to find your own reality
Dead spirit lost its fine logo
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Posted on Wednesday, June 24, 2009 - 10:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Interest grows above ego,
temptation's false security.
Dead spirit lost it's fine logo,
forgotten face of legacy.
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Posted on Thursday, June 25, 2009 - 10:30 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

temptation's false security
Soft passion radiates sky light
forgotten face of legacy
memory walks through dreamless night
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Posted on Friday, June 26, 2009 - 06:51 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Soft passion radiates sky light,
the aura of love's true feeling.
Memory walks through dreamless night,
Summer's quiet is thus appealing.
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Posted on Saturday, June 27, 2009 - 05:08 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

The aura of love's true feeling,
perfectly comsummated time.
Summer's quiet is thus appealing,
sharing as one beautiful rhyme.
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Posted on Monday, June 29, 2009 - 07:31 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Perfectly consummated time,
each moment we spend together.
Sharing as one beautiful rhyme,
our love, which can stand any weather.
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Posted on Tuesday, June 30, 2009 - 09:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Each moment we spend together,
this bond becomes much stronger.
Our love, which can stand any weather,
my passion can't wait any longer.
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Posted on Wednesday, July 01, 2009 - 04:52 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

This bond becomes much stronger,
chained to the laws of chastity.
My passion can't wait any longer,
explore erotic tragedy.
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Posted on Friday, July 10, 2009 - 09:41 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

chained to the laws of chastity
broken thought unlocked the romance
explore erotic tragedy
volumes follow a simple glance
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Posted on Friday, July 10, 2009 - 12:10 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Broken thought unlocked the romance,
beyond the dance floor your eyes did zoom.
Volumes follow a simple glance,
We knew at once from across the room.

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Posted on Friday, July 10, 2009 - 06:01 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Beyond the dance floor your eyes did zoom,
Those faraway eyes captured me.
We knew at once from across the room,
This romance was meant to be.

Those faraway eyes captured me,
like no one else was there.
This romance was meant to be,
I could sense it across the air.

Like no one else was there,
you came into my heart.
I could sense it across the air,
something big was gonna start.

You came into my heart,
and took the best of me.
Something big was gonna start,
and I gave it freely.
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Posted on Tuesday, July 14, 2009 - 11:08 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

and took the best of me
peeling still layers for the core
and I gave it freely
packing left for the empty door
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Posted on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 12:34 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Peeling still layers for the core,
manipulate honesty's price.
Packing left for the empty door,
exhaled seduction's weighted dice.

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Posted on Wednesday, July 29, 2009 - 04:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

manipulate honesty's price
Showered truth wearing brand name shirt
exhaled seduction's weighted dice
lost predictions percept more flirt


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Posted on Wednesday, August 05, 2009 - 09:08 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Showered truth wearing brand name shirt,
hiding anonymous midnight.
Lost predictions percept more flirt,
hostage to words by candlelight.
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Posted on Wednesday, August 05, 2009 - 10:38 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Hiding anonymous midnight,
blankets covered my eyes.
Hostage to words by candlelight,
so scary I shook to my thighs.
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Posted on Thursday, August 06, 2009 - 12:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Blankets covered my eyes,
submissive ignorance sincere.
So scary I shook to my thighs,
weakened conerstones interfere.

Submissive ignorance sincere,
decomposing colors have known.
Weakened cornerstones interfere,
destroying bridges built alone.
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Posted on Thursday, August 06, 2009 - 07:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Decomposing colors have known,
the rustiness of time's demise.
Destroying bridges built alone,
that fall, but then again will rise.
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Posted on Friday, August 07, 2009 - 02:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Great lines dude. . .

The rustiness of time's demise,
preparing creation for death.
That fall but then again will rise,
willing to take another breath.
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Posted on Sunday, August 16, 2009 - 01:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Preparing creation for death,
polluting the future stars.
Willing to take another breath
and transfer the waste to Mars.
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Posted on Tuesday, August 18, 2009 - 05:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Polluting the future stars,
ambition's self destructive force.
And transfer the waste to Mars,
consider suicide's remorse.

Ambition's self destructive force,
tempting moments touching the sun.
Consider suicide's remorse,
forgive what yesterday has done.
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Posted on Tuesday, August 18, 2009 - 08:18 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Tempting moments touching the sun
From memories we steal or borrow
Forgive what yesterday has done
Take no sins into tomorrow
Do not speak to me loudly so that I might hear you... speak to me softly so that I might listen.

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Writing is my passion. Reading is my escape. Living is my reward.
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Posted on Tuesday, August 18, 2009 - 08:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

From memories we steal or borrow,
remember the idealism we had.
Take no sins into tomorrow,
but don't forget what went bad.

Remembering the idealism we had,
and the greed that caused it to burn.
But don't forget what went bad,
and maybe the good times will return.

And the greed that caused it to burn,
was all just yesterday's fashion.
And maybe the good times will return,
If we remember to show compassion.

Was all just yesterday's fashion,
a massive human brain lapse.
If we remember to show compassion,
we begin to fill in the gaps.

A massive human brain lapse,
must now be overcome.
We begin to fill in the gaps,
and stop just feeling numb.

Must now be overcome,
this damage to humanity.
And stop just feeling numb,
help us restore some sanity.

(Message edited by c_steven_blue on August 18, 2009)
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Posted on Saturday, August 22, 2009 - 11:10 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

This damage to humanity,
consuming beautiful decay.
Help us restore some sanity,
shadows of doubt have thrown away.
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Posted on Sunday, August 23, 2009 - 04:18 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Consuming beautiful decay,
the fires of old love burn bright.
Shadows of doubt have thrown away,
memories of what went not right.
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Posted on Sunday, August 23, 2009 - 04:30 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

The fires of old Love burn bright
yet older eyes grow dimmer
memories of what went not right
were blamed upon the zimmer
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Posted on Wednesday, August 26, 2009 - 11:56 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Ok, so humour is not appreciated in this format
So difficult to do anyway in a pantoum, sorry about that, I couldnt resist it. So I now have to straighten it out!!

Yet older eyes grow dimmmer
Life's shadows now converging
were blamed upon the Zimmer
as time and soul are merging
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Posted on Thursday, August 27, 2009 - 04:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Cool lines dude, humor is welcome here, I just never got the time to answer you, that's all.
As you say, humor is not easy to write in this format, so. . .

Yet older eyes grow dimmer,
facing late afternoon decline.
Were blamed upon the zimmer,
fate's subtle sarcastic design.

Facing late afternoon decline,
life's shadows now converging.
Fate's subtle sarcastic design,
as time and soul are merging.

Life's shadows now converging,
conclusive circles written close.
As time and soul are merging,
each chapter made direction chose.
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Posted on Thursday, September 17, 2009 - 07:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Conclusive circles written close,
adamant forms of blinded sight.
Each chapter made direction chose,
yielding what consequences knight.

Adamant forms of blinded sight,
calculated confessions dream.
Yielding what consequences knight,
question tomorrow's silent scream.

Calculated confessions dream,
profitable weaknesses feed.
Question tomorrow's silent scream,
mortified memory must bleed.

Profitable weaknesses feed,
the gentle pain addiction cries.
Mortified memory must bleed,
ambitious truth deceptive lies.
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Posted on Sunday, September 27, 2009 - 04:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

The gentle pain addiction cries,
exaggerated tears in need.
Ambitious truth deceptive lies,
punishes reasonable greed.
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Posted on Monday, December 07, 2009 - 04:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Exaggerated tears in need,
collecting changes circles blame.
Punishes reasonable greed,
performing with another claim.

Collecting changes circles blame,
authentic piece of history.
Performing with another claim,
blind to the happiness still see.
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Posted on Monday, January 18, 2010 - 10:21 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Authentic piece of history,
Excluded words allied with grey.
Blind to the happiness still see,
corruption's treasured yesterday.

Excluded words allied with grey,
forgotten weight of honest dice.
Corruption's treasured yesterday,
understanding plausible price.

Forgotten weight of honest dice,
savory scents please shadowed choice.
Understanding plausible price,
compassion fears addiction's voice.
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Posted on Monday, January 18, 2010 - 11:09 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Savory scents please shadowed choice
relenting only to dark syllable
shrouded in old mysterious voice
His puzzled mind is unfillable


The truth is always bound to lie in the mouth of the truth teller.
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Posted on Monday, January 18, 2010 - 12:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Relenting only to dark syllable
to truth remaining blind
his puzzled mind is unfillable
only demons there to find
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Posted on Monday, January 18, 2010 - 06:08 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

To truth remaining blind
old choices are now extreme
Only demons there to find
Smoke some midsummer dream
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Posted on Wednesday, January 20, 2010 - 10:10 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Hey, Sir Bubs, welcome to my back booth. . .

Old choices are now extreme,
spreading the wealth of histroy.
Smoke some midsummer dream,
numbing December's tragedy.

Spreading the wealth of history,
Burning the friendship silence needs.
Numbing December's tragedy,
blinded to where addiction leads.

Burning the friendship silence needs,
suspicious answers thrown away.
Blinded to where addiction leads,
innocent motives yesterday.
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Suspicious answers thrown away,
thinking on your feet.
Innocent motives yesterday,
show today's results complete.
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Posted on Wednesday, January 20, 2010 - 06:42 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post


Thinking on your feet
No teleprompter needed
Shows todays results complete
Looks like Liberty has succeded
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Posted on Wednesday, January 20, 2010 - 06:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

succeeded
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No teleprompter needed,
when she steps into the light.
Looks like Liberty has succeeded,
In spite of all the fight.
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When she steps into the light,
both parties weeping jealous shame.
In spite of all the fight,
All pawns are sacrificed for fame.

Both parties weeping jealous shame,
hostage to wealth and power known.
All pawns are sacrificed for fame,
forced to obey and die alone.

Hostage to wealth and power known,
no understanding found in greed.
Forced to obey and die alone,
the population's blinded creed.

I have a beer waiting for you Sir Bubs, sit down and join me won't you?
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Posted on Friday, January 22, 2010 - 11:01 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

No understanding found in greed,
unfettered coporate rights to spend.
The population's blinded creed,
will destroy our freedoms in the end.

Unfettered corporate rights to spend,
to own every politician in the land.
Will destroy our freedoms in the end,
by our own Supreme court's hand.
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Posted on Friday, January 22, 2010 - 11:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Corona and lime? lol
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To own every politician in the land,
deceptive promises sincere.
By our own Supreme Court's hand,
justice prevails despite the fear.

Deceptive promises sincere,
convinced that colors all the same.
Justice prevails despite the fear,
showing both sides share equal blame.

Convinced that colors all the same,
throw stones at simple honesty.
Showing both sides share equal blame,
impossible for most to see.

Sure thing dude, better hurry, it's getting warm.
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Posted on Friday, January 22, 2010 - 09:14 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Throw stones at simple honesty
A government has grown wild
not impossible for most to see
Transparency he has not dialed

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Posted on Saturday, January 23, 2010 - 10:19 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

A government has grown wild
They print cash to supply them
Transparency he has not dialled
The Banks run the asylum

They print cash to supply them
With a bonus as incentive
The Banks run the asylum
becoming ever more inventive

With a bonus as incentive
Ideas need cash to try them
Becoming more inventive
but notes need time to dry them

Ideas need cash to try them
The Government should think
but notes need time to dry them
they should try quick drying Ink




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Posted on Sunday, January 24, 2010 - 04:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

The Government should think,
despite the lack of common sense.
They should try quick drying ink,
Claiming ignorance self defence.

Despite the lack of common sense,
both parties tear the world apart.
Claiming ignorance self defence,
pretend to share a human heart.

Both parties tear the world apart,
divided contemplations cry.
Pretent to share a human heart,
crocodile tears for those who die.
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Posted on Monday, January 25, 2010 - 03:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Divided contemplations cry
Manipulations daily strive
Crocodile tears for those who die
Intimidation is still alive

A President running amok
transforming evil to share
Destruction driving a truck
Freedom is suddenly aware

He apologizes for our existence
to our enemy's extreme delight
Its time for armed resistance
Or destruction shall rule the night


Forewarned is Forewarned
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Posted on Monday, January 25, 2010 - 05:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Divided contemplations cry,
manipulations daily strive.
Crocodile tears for those who die,
destruction driving a truck.

Manipulations daily strive,
a president running amok.
intimidation is still alive,
Destruction driving a truck.

A president running amok,
transforming evil to share.
Destruction driving a truck,
freedom is suddenly aware.

Transforming evil to share,
he apologizes for our existance.
Freedom is suddenly aware,
it's time for armed resistance.

He apologizes for our existance,
to our enemy's extreme delight.
It's time for armed resistance,
Or detruction shall rule the night.

Just peing politically correct. . . .Right?
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Posted on Monday, January 25, 2010 - 06:29 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Just peing politically correct. . . .Right?
Peing or being a confusion of sort
A twisted version of midnight
A place where politicians CONsort


The truth will set you free
and happiness is a warm pun
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Posted on Tuesday, January 26, 2010 - 10:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Sorry dude, typing error.

To our enemy's delight,
just being politically correct. . .right?
Or destuction shall rule the night,
a twisted version of midnight.

Just being politically correct. . .right?
peing or being a confusion of sort.
A twisted version of midnight,
a place where politicians CONsort.

Peing or being a confusion of sort,
exercising in urgent need.
A place where politicians CONsort,
using cloak and daggers to feed.

Exercising in urgent need,
Spinning of truth into a lie.
Using cloak and daggers to feed,
question as to the reason why?

Just keeping the pantoum going sir bubs, see how easy they are. I'm sure that now you could do one in your sleep.
Another beer?
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Posted on Tuesday, January 26, 2010 - 11:24 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

lol..I'll try it in my sleep..
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Posted on Wednesday, January 27, 2010 - 08:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Spinning of truth into a lie
hope turns to graft, gold turns to straw
question as to the reason why
change spins corruption into new law.
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Posted on Wednesday, January 27, 2010 - 09:09 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Hope turns to graft,gold turns to straw
Koolaid flows throughout our streams
Change spins corruption into new law
Rationing our nations sweet dreams
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Posted on Thursday, January 28, 2010 - 02:41 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Koolaid flows throughout our streams
historical scenes repeating
Rationing our nations sweet dreams
It's the lies that need defeating
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Posted on Thursday, January 28, 2010 - 07:05 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Historical scenes repeating,
Ignorance thrown to destiny.
It's the lies that need defeating,
when honest sides cannot agree.
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Posted on Saturday, January 30, 2010 - 08:11 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Ignorance thrown to destiny
Is the verdict of the day.
When honest sides cannot agree
Resolution is held at bay.

(Message edited by dallas on January 30, 2010)
DALLAS
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Posted on Saturday, January 30, 2010 - 05:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Is the verdict of the day
the only choice we've got?
Resolution is held at bay,
for the politicians will all be bought.
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Posted on Wednesday, February 03, 2010 - 01:38 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

The only choice we got,
watch as the growing shadows sigh.
For the politicians will all be bought,
using tomorrow's alibi.

Watch as the growing shadows sigh,
whispering darkness yesterday.
Using tomorrow's alibi,
contaminated moments pray.
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Posted on Wednesday, February 03, 2010 - 02:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Whispering darkness yesterday,
spoke to me of hopes & dreams.
Contaminated moments pray,
placate released & faded schemes.
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Posted on Wednesday, February 03, 2010 - 03:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Spoke to me of hopes & dreams
my hidden soul reminding
Placate released & faded dreams
some wishes yet still finding

(Message edited by rowly on February 03, 2010)
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Posted on Wednesday, February 03, 2010 - 07:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

My hidden soul reminding
His memory still etched,
Some wishes yet still finding
In the faded charcoal sketch.

DALLAS
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Posted on Wednesday, February 03, 2010 - 08:36 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

His memory still etched,
a euphemism conceived
in the faded charcoal sketch,
where memory still greived.

(Message edited by c_steven_blue on February 03, 2010)

(Message edited by c_steven_blue on February 03, 2010)
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Posted on Thursday, February 04, 2010 - 04:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

A euphemism conceived
mind's kaleidascope still turning
where memory still greived
for previous patterns yearning
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Posted on Thursday, February 04, 2010 - 08:28 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Mind's kaleidascope still turning
On a carousel
at night
For previous patterns yearning
Shattered dreams succumb...daylight.
DALLAS
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Posted on Friday, February 05, 2010 - 07:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

On a carousel at night,
thoughts travel 'round & 'round.
Shattered dreams succumb...daylight,
reality finally found.
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Posted on Friday, February 05, 2010 - 02:42 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Thouhgts travel 'round & 'round
Mental masterbation
Reality finally found

In spurts of short duration.

DALLAS
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Posted on Friday, February 05, 2010 - 04:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Mental Masturbation
Synapses overworking
in spurts of short duration
both Hemispheres are jerking
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Posted on Friday, February 05, 2010 - 04:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post


Synapses overworking
All askew and out of whack
Both hemispheres are jerking
A prognosis, I do lack.

DALLAS
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Posted on Saturday, February 06, 2010 - 08:25 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

All askew and out of whack,
our insanity is intact.
A prognosis, I do lack,
for the preservation act.
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Posted on Sunday, February 07, 2010 - 01:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Our sanity is intact
To be fractured never more
For the preservation act
Sealed the last crack in the door.

DALLAS
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Posted on Sunday, February 07, 2010 - 04:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Our insanity is intact
To be fractured never more
For the preservation act
Sealed the last crack in the door.

To be fractured never more,
the alter-ego rose and he
sealed the last crack in the door,
to keep out the seeping plea.
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Posted on Sunday, February 07, 2010 - 04:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

The alter ego rose and he
Shunned the guilt and the remorse
To keep out the seeping plea
He feigned reason as his source.

DALLAS
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Posted on Sunday, February 07, 2010 - 07:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

To be fractured never more
Believing in liberty true
Sealed the last crack in the door
Kicked open by freedoms shoe
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Posted on Tuesday, February 09, 2010 - 07:20 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Believing in liberty true
Encased in measured loyalty
Kicked open by freedoms shoe
chained to invented royalty
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Posted on Tuesday, February 09, 2010 - 08:22 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Encased in measured loyalty,
don't walk the way they talk.
Chained to invented royalty,
our heritage they hock.
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Posted on Thursday, February 11, 2010 - 04:47 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Don't walk the way they talk,
Our most illustrious leaders.
Our heritage they hock,
As will their cloned succeeders.

DALLAS
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Posted on Thursday, February 11, 2010 - 07:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Our most illustrious leaders
the best that money can buy
As will their cloned succeeders
No freedom for you or I
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Posted on Friday, February 12, 2010 - 02:06 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

The best that Money can buy
Leaders suits make them look class
No freedom for you or I
Straight Jackets, with a vent in the a$$


(Message edited by rowly on February 12, 2010)
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Leaders suits make them look class,
masking corruption's smiling face.
Straight jackets with a vent in the a$$,
both parties plead deceptive case.

Masking corruption's smiling face,
destructive shadows brewing tea.
Both parties plead deceptive case,
recruiting pawns from history.

Destructive shadows brewing tea,
blind to the truth leading astray.
Recuriting pawns from history,
ignorant faith in yesterday.
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Posted on Wednesday, April 14, 2010 - 02:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Blind to the truth leading astray,
impulsive clowns on bended knee.
Ignorant faith in yesterday,
mourning what hurricanes must be.

Impulsive clowns on bended knee,
kissing ambition's diamond ring.
Mourning what hurricanes must be,
supplications allowed to sing.
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Posted on Wednesday, April 14, 2010 - 03:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

kissing ambition’s diamond ring
while throwing caution to the wind
supplications allowed to sing
still echo on until the end

while throwing caution to the wind
our voices raised in loud protest
still echo on until the end
we’ll persevere! we will not rest!

Keep a notebook handy and a pen that's full of ink.
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Posted on Wednesday, April 14, 2010 - 03:30 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Our voices raised in loud protest,
it's time to prove your muster.
We'll persevere, we will not rest,
until you obsolve the bluster.

It's time to prove your muster,
Help them like you say you can do.
Until you obsolve the bluster,
no one's gonna believe you.
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Posted on Wednesday, April 14, 2010 - 03:45 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Help them like you say you can do
Come on let's take a stand
No one's gonna believe you
Until you prove you can
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Come on let's take a stand,
toasting the ignorance of dawn.
Until you prove you can,
submit to circles fear has drawn.

Toasting the ignorance of dawn,
bloody hands scheme with yesterday.
Submit to circles fear has drawn,
inside the many shades of grey.

Bloody hands scheme with yesterday,
throwing stones at tomorrow's choice.
Inside the many shades of grey,
insanity's amusing voice.

Throwing stones at tomorrow's choice,
divide the happiness of two.
Insanity's amusing voice,
haunting moments of deja vu.

Divide the happiness of two,
conquering perfection of one.
Haunting moments of deja vu,
reload and once more point the gun.
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Posted on Sunday, May 02, 2010 - 10:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Conquering perfection of one,
whispering silence to a dream.
Reload and once more point the gun,
embrace a circle's lustfull scream.

Whispering silence to a dream,
mourning loss of reality.
Embrace a circle's lustfull scream,
pursue dangerous history.
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Posted on Sunday, May 02, 2010 - 12:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Mourning loss of reality,
they pander just to save face.
Pursue dangerous history,
not to regain our place.

They pander just to save face,
destroying our equilibrium.
Not to regain our place,
may set us back a millenium.
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Posted on Monday, May 03, 2010 - 09:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Destroying our equilibrium,
crocodiles weep a wealthy tear.
May set us back a millenium,
brewing the sweetest taste of fear.

Crocodiles weep a wealthy tear,
while peasants cower on the floor.
Brewing the sweetest taste of fear,
screaming corruption keeping score.
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Posted on Monday, May 03, 2010 - 11:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

While peasants cower on the floor,
where is the help they need?
Screaming corruption keeping score,
wallowing in their greed.

Where is the help they need,
while the rich just play their fashion?
Wallowing in their greed,
they have no care or compassion.
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Posted on Wednesday, May 05, 2010 - 04:28 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

while the rich just play their fashion?
on the camel and off the seat.
they have no care or compassion.
Down yonder who enjoys the heat?
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Posted on Wednesday, May 05, 2010 - 05:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

On the camel and off the seat,
repulsive roads of honesty.
Down yonder who enjoys the heat,
Stagnation's unique tragedy.
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(Message edited by 02l on May 05, 2010)
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Posted on Wednesday, May 05, 2010 - 08:45 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

repulsive roads of honesty.
radiant light out of blackness
Stagnation's unique tragedy.
retarded soul drags on slackness

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Posted on Thursday, May 06, 2010 - 01:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Radiant light out of blackness
a Kalidascope of letters
retarded soul drags on slackness
turns words to chains and fetters

A kaleidascope of letters
each turn, the meaning is mistaken
Turn words to chains and fetters
the truth is long forsaken


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Posted on Thursday, May 06, 2010 - 07:42 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Great lines people!

Each turn, the meaning is mistaken,
intricate choices forced to rhyme.
The truth is long forsaken,
translated legends mourning time.
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Posted on Thursday, May 06, 2010 - 07:48 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Intricate choices forced to rhyme,
marred by the muse's mention.
Translated legends mourning time,
capture your attention.

M