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Rainspirit
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Posted on Tuesday, March 10, 2009 - 05:28 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
FOS Presents: The “P” Forms in Riview



Pantoum

Pantun

Paradelle

Pastoral Poem

Pathya Vat

Pensee

Pindaric Ode

Pleiadic

Poem in the Round

Pushkin Sonnet


The forms listed are hyperlinks. You click on the name of the form you like and you'll be linked to the original FOS challenge where that form was featured. Once there, you see how the form is done, you write one and post it at The Starlite Cafe, then you come back here and leave your link and tell us which form you chose.

Enjoy the "p" forms....we will keep these live and on stage for a few weeks...



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Tinyteddy
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Posted on Tuesday, March 10, 2009 - 07:58 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Paradelle

Whoops let's try that again LOL.Too bad to post as a regular post


Fireflies dancing in the night
Fireflies dancing in the night
Igniting their beautiful light
Igniting their beautiful light
Igniting the beautiful night
Fireflies dancing in their light

Flights upon the summers breeze
Flights upon the summers breeze
Graceful ballet in this series
Graceful ballet in this series
Flights in this graceful series
Upon the ballet summers breeze

Sparkles of pure sweet delight
Sparkles of pure sweet delight
Fairy dust sprinkled just right
Fairy dust sprinkled just right
Sprinkled sweet fairy delight
Pure sparkles of dust just right

Ballet of light in summers flights
Dancing sparkles pure delight
Fairy dust igniting the breeze
Fireflies sprinkled their series
In the beautiful this sweet right
Just graceful upon the night

Put yesterday behind you and don't worry about tomorrow,live for today.
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 08:01 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Hi All,

Then Pensee link takes you to the Tanka so I found the link to the Pensee:

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/90092.html?1097472943
:-) Heather

I am a Grateful Kidney Pancreas and Cornea Transplant Recipient
Please Give the Ultimate Gift, Be an Organ & Tissue Donor!!!
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Dawa
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 10:21 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
a pensee...
lovely form this!

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099243.html
moon spirit
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 10:31 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
I have a pantoum for the challenge I think I did it all right I went back and changed it some so if I messed it up I apologize :-)!!

Luminary Kiss
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099244.html

I know the title is shocking LOL!! Kiss, Love no not me!!!
:-) Heather

I am a Grateful Kidney Pancreas and Cornea Transplant Recipient
Please Give the Ultimate Gift, Be an Organ & Tissue Donor!!!
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Rainspirit
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 10:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
My Apologies Poets....I do believe the Pensee link is working correctly now...( Thank you Heather for the heads up)
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Rainspirit
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 10:43 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Teddy.....the Paradelle is one tough from...you did very well....I commend anyone who would even attempt this one
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 10:49 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Double B that is AWESOME!! I think you should give it some dazzle and post it!! I can tell already that form would give me a major BRAIN ACHE!!! Well done!!

And Renee not a problem I just thought I was doing something wrong LOL!! It was wrong when we did the ABC's of poetry originally so if you copied those links that could be why! Any time I can help!!
:-) Heather

I am a Grateful Kidney Pancreas and Cornea Transplant Recipient
Please Give the Ultimate Gift, Be an Organ & Tissue Donor!!!
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Dawa
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 11:14 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
a pleiades...
what a nice form!

nightmares 2
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099249.html
moon spirit
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Mightypendragon
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 11:54 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Yes, it's been a while since I stopped by here, but I've not forgotten it! I did a Pushkin Sonnet, written in iambic hexameter. A little clunky meter, I thought, but once I started I had to finish it... :-)

Embark

Michael
aka Mighty Pendragon
aka Bronze Dragon that was...
If you can't be kind, at least have the decency to be vague.
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 04:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Hello one, hello all.
. . .Pantoum Verse. . .Enjoy.

Friday The 13th

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099284.html
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There's a little black spot on the sun today.
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Mightypendragon
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 07:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
I can't let Tim show up the Pantoum King, can I??

Alone

Michael
aka Mighty Pendragon
aka Bronze Dragon
aka Pantoum King (damned straight!)

If you can't be kind, at least have the decency to be vague.
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Dawa
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 07:51 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
a pantun...i think
nights
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099308.html
moon spirit
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Dawa
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 08:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
a linked pathya vat...
i hope

succubus
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099318.html
moon spirit
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Dawa
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Posted on Thursday, March 12, 2009 - 09:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
my pantoums always seem forced...but i still like trying...
here is
one day at a time
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099322.html
moon spirit
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Atin
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Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 09:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
This pantoum is playing over at the Anyform Goes challenge right now. Didn't know it would fit the form here as well.
nita

Passion's Spell
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099088.html
Keep a notebook handy and a pen that's full of ink.
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Dawa
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Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 05:50 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
another pantun...i think

the fall
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099465.html
moon spirit
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Dawa
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Posted on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 07:24 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
using two of the p forms
in combined form poem

true peace
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099531.html
moon spirit
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 07:30 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Goodness Moon especially has been busy around here! I have a Poem in the Round....


Life Canvas
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099532.html
:-) Heather

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Dawa
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Posted on Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 06:35 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
another pleiades
the stars always
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099624.html
moon spirit
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02l
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Posted on Sunday, March 15, 2009 - 04:52 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
. . .Paradelle Verse. . .
. .Found this VERY difficult. .
Some lines are ify at best.

Crocodile Tears

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099765.html
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There's a little black spot on the sun today.
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02l
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Posted on Sunday, March 15, 2009 - 05:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
. . .Pantun Verse. . .
. .Turned into Pantoum Verse. .

Shallow Water

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099770.html
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There's a little black spot on the sun today.
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02l
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Posted on Monday, March 16, 2009 - 06:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
. . .Poem in the Round. . .

Shattered Mirror

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099923.html
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Dawa
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Posted on Monday, March 16, 2009 - 08:46 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
poem in the round...
done sonnet style

'when nothing matters'
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099939.html
moon spirit
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Dawa
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Posted on Tuesday, March 17, 2009 - 07:00 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
here it is, a paradelle...
called "are you divine?"
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91100077.html

this was BY FAR the hardest form i've ever attempted...
it got a bit dicey toward the third stanza too...
perhaps i could've juggled it around a bit, but my head started aching!

thanks alot rain!


made me feel a bit better to see kitty get her guns!...
hehehe
moon spirit
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Cskpoetmuse
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Posted on Tuesday, March 17, 2009 - 07:32 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
that was so spectacular!!! Bravo! Moon!
"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
Einstein
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Rainspirit
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Posted on Wednesday, March 18, 2009 - 05:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Yes it was moon.......a very difficult form
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Dawa
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Posted on Wednesday, March 18, 2009 - 07:56 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
another poem in the round...in sonnet form...with a twist...with practice, improvement
called
spring's songs
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91100227.html

moon spirit
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Dawa
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Posted on Friday, March 20, 2009 - 05:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
and another pantoum
blessed crone
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91100354.html
moon spirit
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Sirens~song
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Posted on Saturday, March 28, 2009 - 11:08 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Here ya go....
Form: Poem in the Round

You Still Have All Of Me
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91101728.html
"Breathe-in experience Breathe-out poetry"
~Muriel Rukeyser
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Dawa
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Posted on Monday, March 30, 2009 - 01:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
another pleiadic...
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91101983.html
moon spirit
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Sweetfeed
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Posted on Wednesday, April 01, 2009 - 04:00 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Pushkin Sonnet for your bonnet

Pride:
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91102294.html
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes

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