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Rainspirit
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Posted on Sunday, June 28, 2009 - 11:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Heather is going to be in”refrain” mode for the next three weeks. However she will not refrain from asking you all to join her time and again as we review forms that all have a refrain in them.

Confused? read on!

Each of the forms provided below has a repeated line (one or more) or a refrain.

All of these forms were from the first year of the FOS challenge, which began in 2003.

So, as always, post your choice from the list give here in FOS…but do not refrain from returning to post again and again.


Your Refrain forms for this challenge>

Kyrielle http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/82728.html?1073098568

Pantoum http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/54847.html?1160092171

Quatern http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/81490.html?1068209918

Retourne http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/83038.html?1073542176

Rondeau http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/86537.html?1082954759

Rondel http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/85156.html?1076908661

Rondelet http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/82656.html?1072853357

Terzanelle http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/84308.html?1073867130

Triolet http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/81343.html?1068092396

Villanelle http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/82136.html?1068568136


Thanks once again to Heather for manning the FOS boat….She has kept it afloat single handedly.



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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Wednesday, July 01, 2009 - 02:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Hi everyone!

Thought I would come over here and kick things off with a Terzanelle!

Sweet Escape
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91114675.html
:-) Heather

Organ Donors are HEROES I think of mine each day!
Please Give the Ultimate Gift, Be an Organ & Tissue Donor!!!
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Cskpoetmuse
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Posted on Wednesday, July 01, 2009 - 09:11 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Thanks for a great example. I just wanted to point out that when you read the form the links given in them to Michael's examples don't work any more for some reason. Many links in here say "sorry no page". so for you to put examples in is wonderful,Heather. and they are outrageously good ones!
'To get something you never had, you have to do something you never did..'
When God takes something from your grasp, He's not punishing you, but merely opening your hands to receive something better. 'The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.'
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Thursday, July 02, 2009 - 08:00 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Hi Cheryl,

That is a great point! Usually if the poems don't show up any more it is because the poem or the person's profile has been deleted off of the system! I will try to find an exapmple from all of the forms I think I might have written in these before LOL! We have also reviewed these forms in the past so perhaps I can post that link!
:-) Heather

Organ Donors are HEROES I think of mine each day!
Please Give the Ultimate Gift, Be an Organ & Tissue Donor!!!
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Thursday, July 02, 2009 - 08:49 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Here are some examples of the form I left out Terzanelle since I have one of those already...

Kyrielle

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91039618.html


Pantoum

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91039213.html


Quatern

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91040297.html


Retourne

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91039650.html


(I apparently don't have a correct Rondeau yet :-)!)

Rondel

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91039691.html


Rondelet

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91039867.html


Triolet

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91039449.html


Villanelle

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91038989.html


And I will work on a correct Rondeau!
:-) Heather

Organ Donors are HEROES I think of mine each day!
Please Give the Ultimate Gift, Be an Organ & Tissue Donor!!!
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Thursday, July 02, 2009 - 08:51 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Also I got my examples from a previous Refrain Review called Refrain Yourselves there are some other examples there from a lot of current Starliters....

Refrain Yourselves

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/discus/messages/54843/129888.html
:-) Heather

Organ Donors are HEROES I think of mine each day!
Please Give the Ultimate Gift, Be an Organ & Tissue Donor!!!
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Tinyteddy
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Posted on Thursday, July 02, 2009 - 11:04 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
LPQ I'm a looking at these forms and wondering if my noodle is up to the test lol.Most likely I will be back to hack up something
Put yesterday behind you and don't worry about tomorrow,live for today.
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Tinyteddy
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Posted on Thursday, July 02, 2009 - 11:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Oh lookie what I found LOL.One less one to rack my brain with.


Perfect Elements (Terzanelle)

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91073320.html
Put yesterday behind you and don't worry about tomorrow,live for today.
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Tinyteddy
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Posted on Thursday, July 02, 2009 - 11:17 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Whoops make that two lol.

Ocean Bride (Villanelle)


http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91071122.html
Put yesterday behind you and don't worry about tomorrow,live for today.
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Thursday, July 02, 2009 - 11:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Yeah Hi Double B!! I was going to go and find some you wrote to prove you could but you beat me too it! Guess I have been spreading the news of this challenge just about everywhere LOL! So glad to see you!

Earlier I wrote a Rondeau to add to the examples and I forgot to post it LOL! After all my preaching now I guess I need to walk the walk or post the host I don't know LOL!

Rondeau

In Shadows

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91114746.html
Refrain Review....please don't Refrain from writing Refrains :-)!!

Organ Donors are HEROES I think of mine each day!
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Tinyteddy
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Posted on Thursday, July 02, 2009 - 12:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
I'm laughing now found another, this may be an easy time for me if I keep getting lucky and finding them lol.


Rondeau

Sometimes They Fall

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91081852.html
Put yesterday behind you and don't worry about tomorrow,live for today.
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Blind_poet
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Posted on Friday, July 03, 2009 - 08:34 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
I have a rondeau for you, sweet girl....was originally written for the Dragon's challenge but I thought you might enjoy reading it...


http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91099212.html

in poetry,
Dory
If a poem speaks to you be sure and let the poet know what it said.
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Tuesday, July 07, 2009 - 09:02 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
I see a couple of the girls stopped by thank you so much 2T and Dory! I say wherever you find any of these forms feel free to add them here!!!

I brought a Quatern also written for one of 2T's challenges can't remember which one there are so many...giggles...just kidding it's for her FTD phrase!

Diamond Tales
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91115425.html


Refrain Review....please don't Refrain from writing Refrains :-)!!

Organ Donors are HEROES I think of mine each day!
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Tuesday, July 07, 2009 - 10:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Here is another Rondeau....

Forever Knew
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91115436.html
Refrain Review....please don't Refrain from writing Refrains :-)!!

Organ Donors are HEROES I think of mine each day!
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Tinyteddy
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Posted on Tuesday, July 07, 2009 - 01:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Ok LPQ I had another try at the Quatern form lol.


Silent Devotion

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91115451.html
Put yesterday behind you and don't worry about tomorrow,live for today.
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Tinyteddy
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Posted on Tuesday, July 07, 2009 - 06:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
LOL 2 forms in one night my brain hurts now.

Golden Wings (Kyrielle)


http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91115481.html
Put yesterday behind you and don't worry about tomorrow,live for today.
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Hhazlett26
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Posted on Wednesday, July 08, 2009 - 02:56 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
I am going to have to speed up to keep up with 2T!! Keep em coming Girl!

I have a pantoum to share

Make My Way
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91115589.html
Refrain Review....please don't Refrain from writing Refrains :-)!!

Organ Donors are HEROES I think of mine each day!
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Cherrykc
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Posted on Thursday, July 09, 2009 - 04:46 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
A Villanelle for you, Heather. Inspirational subject and I hope you enjoy it. Smiles, love and blessings...Cherry

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91115678.html
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Cherrykc
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Posted on Thursday, July 09, 2009 - 05:42 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Aha! And now a rondel for your perusal, wee lassie...enjoy. Smiles, love and blessings...Cherry
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91115679.html
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Cherrykc
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Posted on Saturday, July 11, 2009 - 07:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Another one for the pot...Stir well, Heather dear. A retourne, I offer...
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91115995.html
love and blessings...Cherry
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Tinyteddy
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Posted on Thursday, July 23, 2009 - 08:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post
Ok LPQ I think this is a Quatern lol.

Portrait's Claim

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91117465.html
Put yesterday behind you and don't worry about tomorrow,live for today.

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