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Once Upon a Haiku

Once Upon a Haiku is simply a writing exercise designed by Rainspirit for fun.

We start the chain with a topic, the haijin (haiku writer) writes a haiku and then suggests a topic for the next person. The next person posts a haiku using that topic and then suggests a topic for the next person. And so on. The topics don't have to be linked, so you can have as many varied topics as you like! It's a good writing exercise as well, keeps the mind in shape!

A few notes on form - haiku v. senryu:

Haiku:
Although our Western interpretation of haiku is that the syllable count is 5-7-5, this is a very loose interpretation. Other syllable counts more closely reflect the original Japanese form. The problem is that traditional haiku used 5-7-5 "on" - which is only loosely translated to "syllables" in English. "On" refers to sounds. The result is that an English haiku of 5-7-5 syllables is significantly longer and contains more information than a traditional haiku of 5-7-5 on. This is why many modern writers write haiku of 10 to 14 syllables.

Either are accepted here - in general, the haiku verse should be:

1. Seventeen (17) syllables or less
2. Contain at least one season word (the Japanese word "kigo")
3. Use a cut to contrast and compare two events or situations

Traditional haiku are preferred in this thread.


Senryu:
The senryu form is structured identically to the haiku; however, whereas the haiku focuses on nature, senryu tend to deal with human nature and often are cynical or darkly humorous, where haiku tend to be more serious.


A few simple rules.

1. You must have fun with this!

2. Enter as many times as you feel inspired, and label your entry as a haiku or a senryu, whichever it is. Also, feel free to use the same topic to write both a haiku and a senryu in the same posting.

3. Should there be two poets that post on the same topic, the second poet should re-post using the first poet's phrase and then gives his phrase again!

4. There is no limit to the number of times you can join in.

5. HAVE FUN!

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Horvax
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Posted on Monday, August 04, 2008 - 11:34 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

a trickle of dew
ants inside scuba diving
inaudible wheeeee!


treat
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will."

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Knightwriter
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Posted on Monday, August 04, 2008 - 12:03 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

trickling grief
on dawn’s early regret
mourning dove weeps



Senryu

treatable regrets
obliviously dancing
to atonement’s dirge

Next: barren
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Kajuncutie
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Posted on Monday, August 04, 2008 - 12:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

barren limbs, naked
arms of oak, outstretched, reaching
shadows of winter


senryu

empty souls, barren
wastelands of indifference
void of compassion


next: fences
Do not speak to me loudly so that I might hear you... speak to me softly so that I might listen.

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Knightwriter
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Posted on Monday, August 04, 2008 - 01:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

averring title
fences once railed boundaries
hushed by time’s nature

Next: withered
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Michaeldragon
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Posted on Monday, August 04, 2008 - 02:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

summer heat pounds
withered flowers bow heads
praying for rain

Next: tall
If you can't be kind, at least have the decency to be vague.
Knowing He Must Go: The Traveler and Other Poems by Michael L. Walker
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02l
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Posted on Monday, August 04, 2008 - 05:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu/Haiku Chain

Trusting in purpose
Suspicious circles confess
Tall shadows have grown.

Tall shadows have grown
Mountains comfort setting sun
Trusting in purpose.

Smile
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Monday, August 04, 2008 - 10:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

rains flooding basements
backed up drains overflowing
plumbers crack a smile

Next: fortune
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02l
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Posted on Tuesday, August 05, 2008 - 01:24 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

Rain in the desert
Life rewarding sunny day
fortune in flowers.

Senryu

Mistaken knowledge
Consequence's fortune found
Killing happiness.

Formal
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Horvax
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Posted on Tuesday, August 05, 2008 - 08:09 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

picnic in the park
a formal briefing of crows
eyeing doggy foe


raid
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will."

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Knightwriter
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Posted on Tuesday, August 05, 2008 - 10:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

raiding dumpsters
a bear’s necessities
scrapping its fears

Next: linger
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02l
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Posted on Wednesday, August 06, 2008 - 05:16 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Throwing the dagger
Listening to helpless screams
Linger in decline.

Haiku

Consumed by the sun
Water slowly disappears
Puddles still linger.

Fake
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Thursday, August 07, 2008 - 02:47 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Faked intention
wins amnesty’s favor
while karma smiles

Next: betrayed
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Friday, August 08, 2008 - 07:11 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

a whiff of cheese
preludes snap decision
hunger betrays

Next: trapped
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02l
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Posted on Friday, August 08, 2008 - 07:50 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Betrayed knowledge
Following tomorrow's dream
Yesterday has trapped.

Haiku

Daming the river
Rising water trapped behind
Human ignorance.

Justice
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Friday, August 08, 2008 - 07:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

execution
masks the face of revenge
where justice hangs

Next: fragrance
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Horvax
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Posted on Friday, August 08, 2008 - 07:45 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

roses sneers at cat
ignores their vapid fragrance
suavely licking claws


petals
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will."

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Knightwriter
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Posted on Friday, August 08, 2008 - 08:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

summer whines
cooler winds prevail
petals fall

Next: farewell
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Catseyes
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Posted on Friday, August 08, 2008 - 11:14 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

with no farewell
summer slips away hidden
by autumn mist


Next honey
Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Saturday, August 09, 2008 - 12:40 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

gossiping bees
with buzz of new honey
while the queen sleeps

Next: rumors
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Catseyes
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Posted on Saturday, August 09, 2008 - 01:08 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

dawn chorus
chattering birds
spreading rumours

Next: pasture
Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Saturday, August 09, 2008 - 08:27 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

dried in summer’s sun
lay bovine pasture patties
pasteurized frisbees

Next: chips
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02l
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Posted on Saturday, August 09, 2008 - 04:01 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

Shaded memories
Old Oak tree finally fell
Just wood chips remain.

Senryu

Vandalized reason
Chips of concrete scattered wide
Surrender to fear.

Taste
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Saturday, August 09, 2008 - 09:58 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

bumbling bees
taste-testing spring bloomings
drunk on nectar

Next: pinch
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Catseyes
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Posted on Saturday, August 09, 2008 - 10:51 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Grandpa's jacket
still scented by
a pinch of snuff


Next: water lily




Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Sunday, August 10, 2008 - 07:37 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

with bluer shades
monet’s water lilies
scent pools with grace

Next: canvas
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Catseyes
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Posted on Sunday, August 10, 2008 - 08:00 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

billowing sails
red canvas trapping
crimson sunset

Next: Pastiche




(Message edited by catseyes on August 10, 2008)
Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Sweetfeed
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Posted on Sunday, August 10, 2008 - 08:44 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

excessive trimming
satirical garden grows
pastiche emotion

spite
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Sunday, August 10, 2008 - 09:08 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

mockingbirds mimic
early morning’s feathered choir
with pastiche medleys


senryu

misunderstandings
unintentional meanings
where spite, finds a home

Next: acoustics
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02l
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Posted on Sunday, August 10, 2008 - 04:46 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Cutting through tension
Troubled acoustics rebound
Waiting for a choice.

Experience
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Sunday, August 10, 2008 - 10:36 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

experience
in increments of life
inches matter

Next: trivial
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02l
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Posted on Monday, August 11, 2008 - 04:38 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu Chain

Throwing the dagger
Listening to helpless screams
Linger in decline.

Linger in decline
Agonizing sacrifice
Searching for darkness.

Searching for darkness
Trivial reflections sigh
Consumed by the sun.

Consumed by the sun
Shadows fading happiness
Knowing no mercy.

Knowing no mercy
Perfect circles admitting
Wasted devotion.

Wasted devotion
Empty promise yesterday
Trusting in purpose.

Trusting in purpose
Justify approaching storm
Punishment deserved.

Punishment deserved
Accept toss of weighted dice
Throwing the dagger.

Haiku

Swift flowing river
Trivial obstructions pass
Seeking ocean's voice.

Soft Touch
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Happiness is a warm gun.

(Message edited by 02l on August 11, 2008)
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Monday, August 11, 2008 - 09:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

with a soft touch
tracing forgotten dreams
lips paint passion

Next: whisper
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Catseyes
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Posted on Tuesday, August 12, 2008 - 01:27 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post




Haiku

rustle of Spring
whispers a lullaby
to new born leaves

Next: charlatan


Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Tuesday, August 12, 2008 - 07:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

scenting the blues
love’s brilliant charlatan
the scarlet rose

Next: adept
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Tuesday, August 12, 2008 - 10:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

with adept charm
luna thirsts for the sea
tides rush to shore

Next: summoned
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Catseyes
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Posted on Wednesday, August 13, 2008 - 12:38 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

summoned by bluebells
bees hum
the tune

Next: saddle

(Message edited by catseyes on August 13, 2008)
Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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02l
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Posted on Wednesday, August 13, 2008 - 08:43 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Answer to no one
Pride will find a victim to
Saddle with burdens.

Haiku

Water slowly flows
Saddling the valley floor
Through aging mountains.

Point
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Catseyes
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Posted on Wednesday, August 13, 2008 - 09:01 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

point of no return
snail halfway up
my fence

Next: whistle
Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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02l
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Posted on Wednesday, August 13, 2008 - 09:14 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Blinded confessions
Hear blade's whistle through the dark
Too late to avoid.

Haiku

Silent confessions
Hearing changing season's call
Whistle in the wind.

Rain
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Catseyes
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Posted on Wednesday, August 13, 2008 - 10:14 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku


raindrops plop
fat moggie shelters
in rusty bucket



Next: archer



Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Wednesday, August 13, 2008 - 02:10 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

the violinist
expertise of an archer
draws harmony’s bow

Next: attuned
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02l
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Posted on Wednesday, August 13, 2008 - 05:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Vengefull aggression
Throwing darkness at the stars
Attuned to treason.

Haiku

Silently growing
Oak tree watches time pass by
Attuned to seasons.

Practice
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Wednesday, August 13, 2008 - 06:51 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

in a practiced strike
cobra coils, falcon swoops
predator turns prey

Next: instants
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Sweetfeed
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Posted on Thursday, August 14, 2008 - 09:02 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

tealeaf instants bagged
steaming cups, sunny tumblers
mental temperatures

Haiku

summer rush, fall’s drop
slow motion winter lets go
melting instants spring

cleanse
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Thursday, August 14, 2008 - 11:16 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

parched eyes tear
rain in the desert
a cleansing

Next: drops
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Thursday, August 14, 2008 - 04:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

words all loosed
every tongue empty
a pin drops

Next: silent
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, August 14, 2008 - 04:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Hey Randy, love your picture. Are you by any
chance reading Wheel of Time by Robert Jordan?

Senryu

Screaming convictions
Kills the dreams of innocence
Too silent to hear.

Haiku

Approaching darkness
Silent shadows grow around
The whispering wind.

Window
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Thursday, August 14, 2008 - 06:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Thanks Tim.. That's a book I haven't read but will add to my list of 'books to read'....

senryu

closing windows
locking the world away
I, the captive


haiku

opportunity
spins a web near its window
and the widow waits

Next: recluse
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Mick_green
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 04:17 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

brown spider recluse
venomous violin plays
sly invitation

his parlor welcomes
hunger provokes all players
inhibitions cast


weeping
"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 05:33 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

the willow bends
to the weeping widow
branches caress


haiku

streaked lightning
from weeping billows
thunder rocks


Next: storm
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Rainspirit
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 12:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

memories flood
looking back through her smile
silent storm

Haiku

Moonless night
Spider swimming in puddle
Storm damage



carnivorous
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02l
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 01:35 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Consuming reason
Questions lingering in death
Carnivorous love.

Haiku

Muddy reflection
Mighty Mississippi bleeds
Carnivorous flood.

Suspect
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Happiness is a warm gun.

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Knightwriter
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 05:11 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

suspected snitches
without anything to lose
pigeons take a stool

Next: sing
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02l
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 05:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Worthless compassion
Listen to tomorrow sing
Believe in yourself.

Scared
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Horvax
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 06:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

scared are gamblers
unschooled to rules of the games
not scared, I don't play

by
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will."

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Mick_green
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 06:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu? haiku? ...you guys decide

racoon's mask of lies
by transparent deception
fools only blind souls

beat



(Message edited by mick_green on August 15, 2008)
"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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Mick_green
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 06:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

oops... first line should have read:

racoon's mask of lies


"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 07:14 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

I think that would be senryu kim.

senryu

a heartbeat
separates the two
life and death

next: fleeting
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Horvax
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 07:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

I think haiku, people don't have the truthfulness of animals anyway lol!}

haiku

oh stung by the bee
asks to bee or not to bee
beats just be eh see

it
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will."

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Horvax
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 07:32 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

fleeting voyeurist
it knows from the very start
of obvious capers

ends
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will."

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Knightwriter
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Posted on Friday, August 15, 2008 - 08:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

seconds tick
moment by moment
life unwinds

Next: sunrise
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02l
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Posted on Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 12:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Deception's critique
Painting sunrise on decline
Division of trust.

Haiku

Watching the sunrise
Drink the dew kissing green grass
When shadows retreat.

Century
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Happiness is a warm gun.
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 03:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

century’s past
must weep a million tears
for the future


haiku

centuries pass
in mere blinks of a lash
for the redwood


next: generation
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02l
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Posted on Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 04:36 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Never forgotten
youthful time of innocence
My generation.

Haiku

Ancient tree falling
Allows ample sunlight for
Next generation.

Explosion

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Knightwriter
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Posted on Saturday, August 16, 2008 - 09:09 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

lightning strikes the match
with thunderous explosion
fire on the mountain

next: ashes
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Posted on Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 03:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku/senryu chain.

Fire on the mountain
Jealously runs with the wind
Stiring the ashes.

Stiring the ashes
Oppression of rebel heart
Lightning strikes the match.

Thanks for the beginning Randy.

Hunted
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Posted on Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 06:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

great chain tim...love it.

haiku

hawking the sky
a silent hunter stalks
a hare, too slow

next: simple
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Posted on Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 06:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

moon blanched tree
black moth on porch light
simple August joy

limestone
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Posted on Sunday, August 17, 2008 - 10:18 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

limestone mem’rys
forgotten history
beneath the brine

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Posted on Monday, August 18, 2008 - 01:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

petrified frog
in thrall to a krait
strike!


Next: champion
Grace

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Posted on Monday, August 18, 2008 - 10:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senyru

Magic number eight eight
Olympic history made
Champion


nettle
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Posted on Monday, August 18, 2008 - 04:36 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

stinging mem’rys
from a chance encounter
nettle’s revenge

next: hummingbird
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Posted on Monday, August 18, 2008 - 05:36 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

Patiently waiting
Watching through open window
Hummingbird soon feeds.

Mile
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Posted on Monday, August 18, 2008 - 05:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

that extra mile
often curves like the ‘s’
that makes it smile

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senryu

doors open
with the curve of a smile
friendship

sultriness




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senryu

crimson
blatant sultriness
licked her lips

next: seductress
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Posted on Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 12:33 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

Black Widow mating
Pleasure sacrificed for life
Seductress of death.

Senryu

Embrace naked truth
Painful pleasure forced to see
Seductress most feared.

Imagine
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Posted on Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 06:36 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

imagined flight
in spun-silk dreamings
where fate takes wing

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Senyru

Across the room
Eyes meet...hold...burn
butterflies

cosmic
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Posted on Wednesday, August 20, 2008 - 12:53 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

supernova explodes
scattering cosmic pieces
a water lily blooms


Next: scurrilous
Grace

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Posted on Wednesday, August 20, 2008 - 05:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Severe punishment
Scurrilous anger revealed
Driving in the screw.

Scratch
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Posted on Wednesday, August 20, 2008 - 06:33 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

scratched surfaces
of antiqued memories
glazed with polish


haiku

cranberries
sun-ripened on the vine
made from scratch


next: vacant

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Posted on Thursday, August 21, 2008 - 12:49 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

vacant rooms
seashells in a jar
summer's gleanings

Next: cushion

Grace

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Posted on Thursday, August 21, 2008 - 08:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

a sharp clawed response
how the soft cushion changes
one black hissing cat !

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Posted on Thursday, August 21, 2008 - 02:08 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

earthworms toiling
just beneath the beauty
of rose’s bloom

next: complex
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Posted on Thursday, August 21, 2008 - 03:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Physical beauty
Crossing shallow water seen
Complex currents drown.
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Posted on Thursday, August 21, 2008 - 07:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

prejudice drowns
in the shallow crossings
of undertows

next: elemental
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Posted on Thursday, August 21, 2008 - 08:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

night delivers joy
harmony embracing earth
elemental peace

saturated
"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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Posted on Thursday, August 21, 2008 - 09:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

autumnal sunset
crimson and gold leaves
saturated sky

Next: chains
Grace

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Posted on Friday, August 22, 2008 - 12:05 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

long line of sparrows
draped across the farmers fields
in unbroken chains

Next; gargoyle
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Posted on Friday, August 22, 2008 - 05:11 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

torrential rains
quenching to overflow
a gargoyle’s thirst

next: discontent
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Posted on Friday, August 22, 2008 - 07:02 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

empty crisp packet
plastic wrappers, and breadless
a crow’s discontent

next; salvage


(Message edited by rosa on August 22, 2008)
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Posted on Friday, August 22, 2008 - 07:27 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

receding waves
loons glide on momentum
moment to salvage

footbridge
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Posted on Friday, August 22, 2008 - 07:49 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

a lily pads strength
stepping aboard, the young coot
bless nature’s footbridge

next; hush
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Posted on Friday, August 22, 2008 - 07:51 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post


Haiku

salvage yard dog
finds friend
in a hub cap

Next: dive
Grace

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Posted on Friday, August 22, 2008 - 08:56 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

soft morning’s breeze
in hushed whispers
tickling leaves


haiku

angry ocean
swirls to tempest’s rhythms
a dolphin dives

Next: harbor
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Posted on Saturday, August 23, 2008 - 06:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

how the witches rede
of foe, let them be times three
malice' venom


poisons
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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Posted on Saturday, August 23, 2008 - 07:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

umm, I think you forgot to use the word left..I'll use both

senryu

the spiteful soul
that harbor venom
poison itself

Next: design
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Posted on Saturday, August 23, 2008 - 07:20 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

wist changing designs
licks with honeyed tongue those then
he spat upon

leaves
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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Posted on Saturday, August 23, 2008 - 07:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

summer’s hued leaves
bowing to fall with grace
paint its season

Next: finesse
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Posted on Sunday, August 24, 2008 - 09:30 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu Chain

Temptation's design
Pressuring weaknesses found
With haunting finesse.

With haunting finesse
Ghosts of memories decide
Visions tomorrow.

Visions tomorrow
Scream the pain of yesterday
Discovering truth.

Discovering truth
Whispering on winds of change
Love taking last breath.

Love taking last breath
Endless summer's conclusion
Smoldering embers.

Smoldering embers
Covered with December's snow
Forgotten ashes.

Forgotten ashes
Fearing to believe in spring
Temptation's design.

Clue
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Posted on Sunday, August 24, 2008 - 03:50 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

weary eyes
drop translucent clues
of lonely

Next: obscure
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Posted on Monday, August 25, 2008 - 01:24 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post


Haiku

clouds obscure the moon
on the lake
swans eyelids droop

Next: cattle
Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Posted on Monday, August 25, 2008 - 07:40 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

voice of promise
misfortune’s cattle-call
to innocence

Next: broken
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Posted on Monday, August 25, 2008 - 02:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Sernyu

Brittle reunion
Circles join in compromise
Till broken once more.

Haiku

Pieces of sandstone
Collecting on mountain side
Broken with time.

Final
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Posted on Monday, August 25, 2008 - 10:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

summer’s breath cools
as a fall’s chill whispers
final farewells

Next: spine
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Posted on Tuesday, August 26, 2008 - 05:01 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

crossroads wind blows
by the old oaks twisted spine
a winter's ballad

next; scenic
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Posted on Tuesday, August 26, 2008 - 06:38 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

imagination
scenic scenarios
of mind

Next: journey
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Posted on Tuesday, August 26, 2008 - 10:59 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

A mountain's journey
Ended with a flowing stream
Searching for answers.

Senryu

Losing direction
Reason's journey led astray
Temptation's vision.

Solitude
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Posted on Wednesday, August 27, 2008 - 02:24 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku


spun in solitude
blanket of autumn fog; wafts
a pearlescent web

next: rust
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Posted on Wednesday, August 27, 2008 - 06:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

the touch of the breath
landing gently,
bones of the earth age

next: Warmth
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Posted on Thursday, August 28, 2008 - 01:54 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

wrapped in beams of light
the gifts of radiant warmth
fields of sunflowers

next: spark

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Posted on Thursday, August 28, 2008 - 05:03 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

spark of life
hairline crack
in the shell


Next: wisdom
Grace

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Posted on Thursday, August 28, 2008 - 09:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

shades of silver grey
wisdom does not grow on trees
the old man’s long beard

next; bamboo

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Posted on Friday, August 29, 2008 - 07:15 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

fluted tunes
bamboo renditions
of wind songs

Next: breath
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Posted on Friday, August 29, 2008 - 07:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

whoosh of the sea wind
as thin as, cold sharp salty
takes her breath away

next: vase
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Posted on Friday, August 29, 2008 - 08:15 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post



Haiku

daisies reflected
in pooling water
cracked blue vase

Next: sacrifice
Grace

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Posted on Friday, August 29, 2008 - 08:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

yet no one knows why
she turned on her heels; and walked
humble sacrifice

next: wicker
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Posted on Friday, August 29, 2008 - 10:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

tomorrow’s hope
wicker woven baskets
of fragile dreams

Next: vision
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Posted on Saturday, August 30, 2008 - 01:17 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku



a billion stars
blinking
night vision

Next: circle
Grace

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Posted on Saturday, August 30, 2008 - 05:01 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu Chain:

Approaching darkness
Growing shadows chill the wine
Waiting for first star.

Waiting for first star
Wishing love perfect and true
Beneath deception.

Beneath deception
Blind to gentle winds of change
Warning of midnight.

Warning of midnight
Screaming satisfaction found
Holding extra time.

Holding extra time
Grains of sand through fingers fall
Writing words alone.

Writing words alone
Commit waning moon to earth
Cursing vision.

Cursing vision
Watch a shooting star return
Stolen episodes.

Stolen episodes
Bleed the morning sunshine dry
Protecting just grey.

Protecting just grey
Fearing consequense's shown
Completing circle.

Completing circle
Understanding afternoon
Approaching darkness.

Idea
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senryu

perfection
ideal ideas
of naive

Next: pepper
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Posted on Sunday, August 31, 2008 - 10:35 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

All bark but no bite
Scruffy and most adorable
Lab-boxer Pepper.

next: mosaic
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Posted on Thursday, September 04, 2008 - 03:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Squared consequences
Beautiful colors of crime
Greedy mosiac.

Respect
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Posted on Sunday, September 07, 2008 - 03:51 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Protected logic
Message in a bottle send
Respect for the dead.

Haiku

Afternoon sunshine
Growing shadows on the ground
Darkening respect.

Ocean
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Posted on Sunday, September 07, 2008 - 07:00 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

gray matter fog smokes
horizontal stratus sieves
an ocean of tears

salt

Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Posted on Monday, September 08, 2008 - 10:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

salted dreams
blur the empty eyes
of lost hope

Next: bleak
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Posted on Tuesday, September 09, 2008 - 12:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

Bleak the sky
Bleeding acid rain
P'on parched earth

Next: Cyprus
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Posted on Tuesday, September 09, 2008 - 05:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Words written in stone
Love's forever fading voice
Cyprus memories.
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Posted on Tuesday, September 09, 2008 - 07:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Lovely, Timothy...

BUT..

WHAT'S THE NEXT WORD?(Inquiring minds want to know).
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Posted on Tuesday, September 09, 2008 - 07:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

...I'll just drop in a word to keep this going:

symmetry
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Posted on Wednesday, September 10, 2008 - 06:35 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

seaching words in vain
feelings mar the symmetry
cast aside for naught

ponder
"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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Posted on Wednesday, September 10, 2008 - 11:53 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

So sorry people. . .

Senryu

Chastity's mirror
Temptation so plainly shown
Ponders perfection.

Haiku

Eyes in the darkness
Ponder lights that quickly pass
Questioning safety.

Policy
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Posted on Wednesday, September 10, 2008 - 01:01 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

a spillage of milk
best use for a policy
and a happy cat !

next; post
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Posted on Thursday, September 11, 2008 - 04:08 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

Elements of time
Fading numbers on mile post
Difficult to read.

Senryu

Searching for purpose
Message in a bottle post
hoping someone finds.

Medium
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Posted on Friday, September 12, 2008 - 04:58 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Another moment
Content finding sudden grey
Happy medium.

Haiku

Newly planted tree
Left alone for many years
Now medium height.

Next: Hurricane
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Posted on Sunday, September 14, 2008 - 08:52 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

hurricane-forced
waves of destruction
sink fragile lives

Next: lost
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Posted on Monday, September 15, 2008 - 07:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

Lost baby robins
Nested in hurricane'd trees
Hungers for a worm

Next: fern
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Posted on Thursday, September 18, 2008 - 03:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

Hiding in the shade
Seen only by gentle breeze
Silent fern growing.

Moment
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Posted on Friday, September 19, 2008 - 07:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

in winter’s pale
where time tempers mem’ry
moments mend hearts

Next: absolved
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Posted on Saturday, September 20, 2008 - 02:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Dismal conclusion
Forced to live another's dream
Absolved of freedom.

Haiku

Morning approaches
Subtle lighting of the sky
Absolvent darkness.

Scheme
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Posted on Monday, September 22, 2008 - 02:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Blurry revisions
Defending what passions scheme
Tainted temptation.

Next: Emotion
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Posted on Wednesday, September 24, 2008 - 11:25 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Frozen emotion
Melting in the rising sun
Love feeling once more.

Haiku

Stormy emotion
Grey clouds cry torrent of tears
Watering flowers.

Picture
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Posted on Wednesday, September 24, 2008 - 09:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post


superstitious earth
picturesque orbs are equals
yet misunderstood

black and white, truth lies
imploring subjective thoughts
trapped in framed pictures

final
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Posted on Thursday, September 25, 2008 - 03:31 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Tragic influence
Listening to voices plead
Take one final breath.

Haiku

Moth in spider's web
Vainly trying to escape
Life's final joke.

Off
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Posted on Friday, September 26, 2008 - 03:22 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Farewell tomorrow
Turning off all hope to see
What is possible.

Next: Flame
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Posted on Saturday, September 27, 2008 - 04:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Remember the flame
Dragon sharing with a Knight
Most beautiful words.

Haiku

Oppressive darkness
Surrendering sphere of light
To a candle's flame.

Black
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Posted on Sunday, September 28, 2008 - 05:34 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Black intuition
Helpless to forces of need
Demanding reason.

Rocks along the trail
Changing leaves fall to the ground
Hiding black walnuts.

Next: WHITE
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Posted on Monday, September 29, 2008 - 04:45 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Nothing so simple
Black and white just shades of grey
Depending on view.

Haiku

Endless perfection
Boating along whitefish cove
Before the first snow.

Blue
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Posted on Saturday, October 04, 2008 - 05:24 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Abusing power
Innocent victims suffer
Frozen black and blue.

Next: PINK
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Posted on Sunday, October 05, 2008 - 02:09 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

drawn inexorably
towards the setting sun
frayed ends of pink clouds

Next: chariot


Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Posted on Tuesday, October 07, 2008 - 03:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

pounding the ground still
chariots break the silence
war's oxymoron

cause

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Posted on Tuesday, October 07, 2008 - 04:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Preying on rainbows
Vandalizing yesterday
Rebel without cause.

Purpose
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Posted on Wednesday, October 08, 2008 - 12:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

of life’s full cup
purpose sips from the void
behind greed’s gulps

Next: veracity

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Posted on Thursday, October 09, 2008 - 01:38 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

George's veracity
hatchet in hand
fells his father!



Next: ethereal


Grace

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Posted on Thursday, October 09, 2008 - 09:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

shrouding the moon’s sight
ethereal clouds transport
closed fists of autumn

senryu

ethereal eyes
doll faced child of prophecy
mass reproductions

regal
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Posted on Thursday, October 09, 2008 - 10:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

in midnight’s mirror
dwells the regal reflection
of tomorrow’s rise

Next: promise
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Posted on Friday, October 10, 2008 - 12:46 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

chrysalis on a leaf
promise of another
flying flower

Next: Cell
Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Posted on Friday, October 10, 2008 - 10:09 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

shaiknryu (lol)

wary of spiders
sense of security false
venus' cell snaps

opts
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Posted on Saturday, October 11, 2008 - 05:04 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Changing seasons fear
Strength and weakness compromise
opts for lasting peace.

Private
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Posted on Saturday, October 11, 2008 - 09:29 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

May I try this? First time, lol!
-------------------------------------------------
fears mused in silence
thoughts and dreams unseen
eyes focused in private

:Choice
EmpressPoetess
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Posted on Saturday, October 11, 2008 - 11:11 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

caution ahead
road under construction
paved by choices

Next: slow
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Posted on Sunday, October 12, 2008 - 08:35 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

spring's slow chariot
melts ice of ages to birth
watered memories

senryu

love's new taste on lips
hunger pangs once starved are quenched
best savored slowly

volition
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Posted on Monday, October 13, 2008 - 03:33 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Rebel's decision
Given freedom found in death
Volition to arms.

Haiku

Destructive power
Seen through a hurricane's eye
Nature's volition.

Wage
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Posted on Tuesday, October 14, 2008 - 10:18 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

pushed, cold will moves clouds
winds wager on volition
man's seasons bitter


haiku

costly hurricanes
sea's centrifugal maids dust
nature's wages spent

flank
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Posted on Thursday, October 16, 2008 - 04:39 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Offensive posture
Rolling up the leftest flank
Like an ancient map.

Most
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Posted on Friday, October 17, 2008 - 10:31 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

most nights, muted tears
despite the moon’s silver glow
the sun sets at dawn

next; defeat
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Posted on Saturday, October 18, 2008 - 04:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Continued darkness
Mortal injury sustained
Avoiding defeat.

Challenge
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Posted on Tuesday, October 21, 2008 - 04:35 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Challenge survival
Waking a dragon from sleep
Brandishing a sword.

Shade
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Posted on Wednesday, October 22, 2008 - 01:44 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

sun on the water
black heron's wings shade
unwary fish. Gulp!

Next: Constant


Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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02l
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Posted on Wednesday, October 22, 2008 - 01:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Cynical blindness
Understanding constant truth
Just impulsive lies.

Symbol
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Posted on Friday, October 24, 2008 - 08:34 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

to each, his own
I for I, truth for truth
symbolic sums

Next: equation
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Posted on Saturday, October 25, 2008 - 08:36 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

anchored, freedom brings
epiphytes yin yang embraced
measured equation

ribbed


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Posted on Saturday, October 25, 2008 - 04:20 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Ancient construction
Taxing without any say
Rebellion's ribbed cause.

Revoke
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Posted on Sunday, October 26, 2008 - 12:36 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

earth of opinions
global melting pot revokes
ethnic heritage

prime
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Posted on Sunday, October 26, 2008 - 05:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Written instruction
Taken with a grain of salt
Prime situation.

Bitter

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Posted on Monday, October 27, 2008 - 01:32 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

antarctic glaciers
bitter boreal reveals
winter's temperament


senryu

tenderized bitter
melodic yet pernicious
aortic thumping

digenous
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Posted on Tuesday, October 28, 2008 - 04:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Traveling abroad
Treated with certain mistrust
Digenous feelings.

Haiku

Digenous summer
Floating iceberg slowly melts
Drifting from winter.

Concert
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Posted on Tuesday, October 28, 2008 - 08:47 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

while wind sections blow
the brook babbles in concert
trees, stretching limbs, dance


senryu

frenzied concert ends
concrete emotions failing
prelude to road rage

wheel
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Posted on Wednesday, October 29, 2008 - 02:07 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

junkyard dog
finds soulmate in
wheel hub cap

Next Journey
Grace

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Posted on Wednesday, October 29, 2008 - 11:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

tattered cat
next greasy journey
wheel hub cap

cuddled
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Posted on Wednesday, October 29, 2008 - 01:21 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

closest to embrace
never feeling another
her palms cuddled tears

haiku

shivering mountain
warmed under deceiving rains
jack's blankets cuddled

silk
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Posted on Thursday, October 30, 2008 - 05:48 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

silk-spun dreamings
meticulous weavings
of fluttered flights

Next: metaphor
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Posted on Friday, October 31, 2008 - 04:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Bleeding honesty
Metaphoric tragedy
Screaming in silence.

Roman
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Posted on Saturday, November 01, 2008 - 05:51 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

romantic roman
rose imperial power
thorns friction scars thrones

purple
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Posted on Sunday, November 02, 2008 - 11:10 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

swollen windows
‘neath purpled persuasion
still fogged with hope

Next: abused


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Posted on Monday, November 03, 2008 - 11:34 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Grey information
Leading black and white astray
Perceptions abused.

Haiku

Blinded hurricane
Abused by conflicting winds
Weeping shortened life.

Witness
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Posted on Wednesday, November 05, 2008 - 06:38 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Yesterday's relic
Witness to deception's crime
Weeps for tomorrow.

Path
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Posted on Friday, November 07, 2008 - 04:03 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Consequence waiting
For blinded ambitions to
Stray from narrow path.

Haiku

Wildflowers blooming
Morning sunshine smiles upon
a less traveled path.

Repair
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Posted on Saturday, November 08, 2008 - 04:53 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

The night sky looks down
With a smile of moon rising
My heart in repair

tickle
your friend in rhyme
Nancy A Hemsworth
AKA Penneduppoet
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Posted on Saturday, November 08, 2008 - 04:20 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Beyond revision
Complicating simple grey
Temptation's tickle.

Haiku

Morning sunshine
Chasing shadows left by night
Tickling the ground.

Saunter
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Posted on Wednesday, November 12, 2008 - 11:51 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

your book's cover viewed
the saunter demands a glance
yet eyes blink empty

haiku

regal mountains sit
watching nature's play front row
as clouds saunter past


lop


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02l
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Posted on Thursday, November 13, 2008 - 03:03 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Losing distinction
Lop off syllables unused
Becoming the crowd.

Book
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Posted on Saturday, November 22, 2008 - 09:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

earth's crusted parchment
scribed for those above to read
bookmarked on her skin

senryu

covered with thick skin
the soul emerges cautious
to be judged daily

tune
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Posted on Sunday, November 23, 2008 - 01:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

dawn sky
the sweetest tune
drowning in birdsong

Next: waltz
Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Posted on Sunday, November 23, 2008 - 04:55 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

winters' footprints trip
walzing cross the window pane
frozen fresco forms



caress
your friend in rhyme
Nancy A Hemsworth
AKA Penneduppoet
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Posted on Monday, November 24, 2008 - 04:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Frozen fresco forms
Whispering addictions to
December's caress.

Possess
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Posted on Friday, November 28, 2008 - 09:07 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

Possess a kind thought
To bring a little Christmas
What money can’t buy

next; smile
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Posted on Tuesday, December 02, 2008 - 09:54 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Timid construction
Distracted by smallest smile
Thrown from heaven's blame.

Generation
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Posted on Wednesday, December 03, 2008 - 09:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

imitating art
generations, red noses
bar stool's flight patterns

yawn to yarn to yard
generations seed and sown
beckon brevity

fortress
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Posted on Wednesday, December 03, 2008 - 10:27 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

is this wood, fortress?
left, exposed in nature's wrath
more than floor, leaves hide

chatter
"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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Posted on Wednesday, December 03, 2008 - 12:30 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Knowledge fears silence
Ignorance a dream come true
Chatter kills secrets.

Haiku

Mountain beginning
Tiny streams with liquid voice
Chatter of future.

Address
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Posted on Friday, December 05, 2008 - 10:35 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Address life’s issues
One folded leaf crumbling; speaks
Of cold winter nights

Next; perhaps


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Posted on Sunday, December 07, 2008 - 02:45 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Beautiful message
Yesterday has left behind
Memory perhaps.

Haiku

Perhaps falling leaves
Understand abandonment
Laying on the ground.

Shallow
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Posted on Saturday, December 13, 2008 - 01:12 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

profound waters
‘neath shallow reflection
sallows a soul

Next: infinite
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Posted on Saturday, December 13, 2008 - 04:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Considering love
Greatest risk greatest reward
Infinite wisdom.

Haiku

Beautiful mountains
Infinite existance shown
Carving the valleys.

Hour
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Posted on Sunday, December 14, 2008 - 12:36 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

desertion
finds its hour of need
infinite

Next: abandon
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Posted on Sunday, December 14, 2008 - 06:31 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Abandon
me in my dreams
only

Next: solece
EmpressPoetess
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Posted on Monday, December 15, 2008 - 11:39 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

what shadow casts
but from the very light
of great solace

Next: reprieve
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Posted on Thursday, December 18, 2008 - 04:33 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Run from the darkness
Solitude by candlelight
A moments reprieve.

Around
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Posted on Friday, December 19, 2008 - 12:28 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

constrictive views
in a wrap-around world
the boa’s life

Next: coiled
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Posted on Friday, December 19, 2008 - 07:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

lithe cheetah
a waiting, watching
coiled spring


Next: silence
Grace

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Posted on Sunday, December 21, 2008 - 09:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

quivering lips
find blue shades of silence
never golden

Next: abandon
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Senryu

Suspious colors
Changing how a theory lives
Reckless abandon.

Haiku

Falling to ruins
Ancient castle long ago
Abandoned to time.

Comfort
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Posted on Wednesday, December 24, 2008 - 11:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Christmas gift
for grandpa's comfort
a tartan scarf

Next: crumbs


Merry Christmas everyone!

Grace

Me! Having a senior moment? NO! I am just having an intellectual episode! ~ Grace Galton
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Posted on Tuesday, December 30, 2008 - 01:00 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

honking orders
of bread crumbs and popcorn
anxious geese feast

Next: entice
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Senryu

Starving attraction
Hiding motives with sunshine
To entice rainbows.

Haiku

Flower's sweet nectar
Means to entice honey bee
For reproduction.

Adjust
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Posted on Saturday, January 03, 2009 - 12:00 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Drizzly
Adjust beaks
Drenched

saturate
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Posted on Saturday, January 03, 2009 - 12:04 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Drizzly juice
Adjusted beaks pierce
Drenched feathers
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Posted on Saturday, January 03, 2009 - 12:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

saturate
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senryu

tearstained cravings
saturating the soil
of addiction

Next: enslaved
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Posted on Monday, January 05, 2009 - 11:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

enslaved
symbiotic lovers
harmonise

Next: ice
Grace

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Posted on Wednesday, January 07, 2009 - 11:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

iced dreams preach
to winter’s chilled glare
spring’s promise

Next: resurrection
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Posted on Wednesday, January 14, 2009 - 06:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

thaw of time
resurrection springs
fall forward

senyru

adhesive advice
seeks resurrection
of shattered hope

vertigo
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Dreaming vertigo
Voices poisoned promises
Vomit circumstance.

Force

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senryu

force shakes a fist
as compassion’s power
claims sovereigns

Next: vanquished
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Posted on Thursday, January 15, 2009 - 04:37 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Positive pressure
Vanquished morning shadows scream
A waning moon's lie.

Plateau

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Posted on Friday, January 23, 2009 - 11:02 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

a morning surprise
robin on my window sill
weatherman winking
Build a dream and the dream builds you
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mugger in the park
is happiness a warm gun
my wallet empty
Build a dream and the dream builds you
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winter blows the blues
snowflakes dancing in the wind
snowmen applauding
Build a dream and the dream builds you
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Posted on Saturday, January 24, 2009 - 03:38 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Frozen emotions
Dreaming of July
Walk mourning's plateau.

Anger
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senryu

patience sips
of empathy’s cup
anger smiles

Next: tolerance
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Posted on Wednesday, January 28, 2009 - 05:29 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Amazing words dude, Very cool.

Senryu chain

Scandalous rainbows
Offering color to grey
Seen through naked truth.

Seen through naked truth
Tolerance to darkness known
Hidden from the light.

Hidden from the light
Careless whispers yesterday
Fearing tomorrow.

Fearing tomorrow
Changing purpose of a name
Vandalized by rhyme.

Vandalized by rhyme
Promises love making to
Scandalous rainbows.

submission
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Posted on Wednesday, February 04, 2009 - 04:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

jungle submission
surrounded by hyenas
a king must retreat

face
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Posted on Tuesday, February 10, 2009 - 11:30 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Thanks Tim!

haiku

spring’s first bloomings
faceless simplicities
welcoming smiles

Next: awakened
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Posted on Thursday, February 12, 2009 - 03:28 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Confession's mourning
Holding empty shades of grey
Awakened vengeance.

Final
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Posted on Sunday, February 15, 2009 - 09:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

stars and stripes
wave final farewells
to freedom

Next: dirge
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Posted on Sunday, February 15, 2009 - 04:16 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Tomorrow mourning
Listen to yesterday's dirge
Remember love lost.

Discreet
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senryu

discreet leaves touch
plus a grumpy poet---
equals bad haiku


Midol
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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Posted on Monday, February 16, 2009 - 03:56 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu(a very lame one at that)

Monthly frustration
Midol swallowed for relief
When hormones raging.

Sorry, best I could come up with.

Sound
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Posted on Monday, February 16, 2009 - 08:50 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

sorry Tim my bad

an imp with mischief
breaking and entering sounds
followed by bopping


bye
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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Posted on Monday, February 16, 2009 - 11:10 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

syaiku

seeking balance,
a midolized poet
uncramps her style

haiku winces
as senryu limps away
(no imps were harmed)

all life’s cycles
savor sips of friendship
with no goodbyes

haiku blooms
senryu lends its soul
syaiku is born

plant me a smile
and even sorrow’s soil
becomes fertile

Next: synchronized ;)
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Posted on Tuesday, February 17, 2009 - 10:50 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

syaiku

synchronized souls smile
recognizing each other
matching bathing suits

twins
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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Posted on Thursday, February 19, 2009 - 03:49 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Strangest reunion
Happiness all mourning long
Twins of circumstance.

Brandy
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Posted on Sunday, February 22, 2009 - 10:56 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

brandy and lemons
steam rising from the cup
talking through his nose


sneeze
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Posted on Thursday, February 26, 2009 - 04:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Recorded images
Breathe uncertain destiny
Fighting treason's sneeze.

Dew
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Posted on Thursday, February 26, 2009 - 11:18 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

morning’s moisture
reluctantly settles
to pay its dew

next: awash
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senryu

awash the dishes
awash the laundry too
everyfink whew!

amiss
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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Posted on Friday, February 27, 2009 - 02:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Whispered temptation
Questions love crying alone
Something is amiss?

March
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Posted on Saturday, February 28, 2009 - 12:09 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Good one Tim..."questions love crying alone" Great line!!

Jo: amiss you, and your sense of humor....thanks for the syaiku too! :-)


haiku

whispers of spring
enlighten the march squall
of winter’s dirge

Next: conception
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Posted on Saturday, February 28, 2009 - 09:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Thanks for the praise dude, your lines are amazing as well. . . .

Senryu

Broken promises
Rape the sunshine's rising dream
Hatred's conception.

Speech
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Posted on Saturday, February 28, 2009 - 11:02 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

a dragon's heart bought
by a mischievous serf imp
taste like a speech!

my sense of humour Rands is greatly amiss lol
amiss you and Mark
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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Posted on Saturday, February 28, 2009 - 11:03 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

next: mark
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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Posted on Monday, March 02, 2009 - 12:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Rover lifts his leg
Leaving his personal mark~~
Why on my carpet?

Next~~turtle



One ought every day at least to hear a little song, read a good poem, see a fine picture, and, if it were possible,to speak a few reasonable words.--Goethe
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senyru

echoes voiced inside
conviction poked it's head out
turtle wisdom spoke

haiku

the jackrabbit springs
offroad he is high centered
winter turtles on

hi-chop-n-u

while two turtles love
the partridge in their pair tree
streams youtube uploads

tasteless
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Posted on Wednesday, March 04, 2009 - 04:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

form: traditional haiku

winter drapes its rain
across swollen mountain peaks
tasteless, as a whore


next: eclipse
Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments. Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove. -W. Shakespeare
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Posted on Wednesday, March 04, 2009 - 08:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

a minor moon’s
ecliptic illusions
illuminate

Next: endurance
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Senyru

Withdrawing from race
Forgotten motives reward
Lack of edurance.

Rally
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Senryu

a rally of mimes:
silent articulation’s
poets in motion

Next: whispers
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Posted on Friday, March 06, 2009 - 12:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

December whispers
Careless numbers of July
To January.

Genuine
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senryu

complexity smiles
at the genuine genius
of simplicity

Next: congruent
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senryu

simplicity smiles
at the glossy glossary
of complexity

Next: equal
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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Senryu Chain

Translated mourning
Another victim of love
Congruent darkness.

Congruent darkness
Seperated direction
In death all equal.

In death all equal
Life a picture on the wall
Translated mourning.

Detail
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Senryu

detoxed details
etched in stoned reflections
of addiction

Next: Impassioned
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Senryu

Impassioned knowledge
Forced ignorance believing
Only one answer.

Junction
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Posted on Friday, March 13, 2009 - 03:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

sometimes you get stopped
at a rough junction in life
turn right and move on

Next: choices
Keep a notebook handy and a pen that's full of ink.
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Posted on Tuesday, March 17, 2009 - 05:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

One destination
Many choices sorted through
Ambition decides.

Scroll
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senryu

even the dead see
as quilled upon the great scroll
life’s consecration

Next: confirmation
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Senryu

Happiness shattered
devestating cost of choice
Fate's confirmation.

Consentration
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Posted on Monday, March 23, 2009 - 05:24 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

cobblestones peeking
potholes chomping muddy tires
spring's confirmation

if concentration
had not failed me yesterday
i could have been first

next: heritage
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Senryu

Twilight survival
Living on another's loss
Despite heritage.

Office
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senryu

a final writ
the office of the dead
without appeal

Next: vesper
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Posted on Wednesday, March 25, 2009 - 02:11 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

earth casts no shadows
laity in harmony
orb's vesper from wolves

loquacious

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Senryu

piety plays
on loquacity’s tongue
ne’er fault to claim

Next: autonomous
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pretty butterfly
flying autonomously
flutter by flowers







"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
Einstein
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Posted on Thursday, March 26, 2009 - 11:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

acquiescent earth
fertility’s foundation
futility’s tomb

Next: instinct
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haiku

the seed's instinct bade
blossoming, the sun is just
another flower

Next: trust


"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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haiku

on wafts of trust
dandelion wishes
are granted wings

Next: proliferation
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Senryu

Hiding from the night
Problem's proliferation
Kills independence.


Haiku

Changing with seasons
Proliferation of life
Spreading all around.

Protege
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senryu

discrimination’s
protégé of ignorance
is detestation

Next: cyclicity
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cyclical seasons
skin, soil, life and death fuse
revolution's fate

uneducated
procreation's cyclic seed
chokes substantive fruits

midden
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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senryu

a lexis midden
uncovers articulation’s
poetic patois

Next: necropolis

(Message edited by knightwriter on April 01, 2009)
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Senryu

Written history
Forgotten circles started
Necropolis of names.

Nagivate
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senryu

specters rattle chains
of abstract navigation’s
concrete intention

Next: abandoned
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Senryu

Abandoned spirits
Helpless to the life surrounds
Screaming in silence.
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Damn, forgot subject. . .

And
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senryu

and--a small word
should it rule: eternal
never the and

the and...the and...the and...

Next: solstice
"An it harm none, do what 'ye will. An it cause harm, do as 'ye must"

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Posted on Wednesday, April 15, 2009 - 08:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

solstitial seasons
balancing in equinox
mirror yin and yang


Next: ecliptic


(Message edited by knightwriter on April 15, 2009)
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02l
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Posted on Friday, April 24, 2009 - 02:08 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Questioning circles
Where is beginning and end
Ecliptic response.

Prevent
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Saturday, April 25, 2009 - 01:12 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

obsession’s rage
finds addiction’s master
prevention’s cure

Next: Cravings
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Posted on Tuesday, April 28, 2009 - 09:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Special dark candy
Hershey kisses too damn good
Chocolate Cravings.

Swelter
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Sunday, May 10, 2009 - 12:04 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

sweltering
in the stench of greed
vice turns vile

Next: duplicity
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Posted on Sunday, May 10, 2009 - 03:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

time's duplicity
fickle friend, own enemy
and we, its victim


next: shimmers
Do not speak to me loudly so that I might hear you... speak to me softly so that I might listen.

******
Writing is my passion. Reading is my escape. Living is my reward.
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Posted on Sunday, May 10, 2009 - 03:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

pokes up for a peek
then dunks itself back under
blue heron shimmers

next; sandpiper
~Debera UHW
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Wednesday, May 13, 2009 - 01:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

a sandpiper
measures an ocean’s crux
from the shallows

Next: essential
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Posted on Wednesday, May 13, 2009 - 04:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

essential free will
subjective thoughts, simple rain
excrement of clouds

full
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Wednesday, May 13, 2009 - 05:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

a vacant stare
finds isolation’s cup
full of empty

Next: defeated
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Posted on Wednesday, May 13, 2009 - 08:11 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

schooled fish no water
youth treading wisdom’s tears
defeated hope drowns

rest
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Thursday, May 14, 2009 - 11:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

shadows lay silent
echoes of images rest
embraced by midnight

Next: slumber
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Sweetfeed
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Posted on Thursday, May 14, 2009 - 01:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

rapid eye movement
impulsiveness slumbers on
anxiety’s dreams

caress
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Thursday, May 14, 2009 - 04:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

singed reality
at the fringe of illusion
caresses a dream

Next: hunger
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Posted on Thursday, May 14, 2009 - 05:20 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu(attempt)

solitary breath
audible even alone
hungers lonely dreams

dandelion
"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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Posted on Thursday, May 14, 2009 - 06:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

the dandelion
instrument of afterlife’s
perfect portrayal

Next: creation

(Message edited by knightwriter on May 14, 2009)
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Posted on Thursday, May 14, 2009 - 08:50 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

creation’s stronghold
evolution breeds questions
faith breeds believers

haiku

winds, seasons of life
subtle push of seed to sod
breath of creation

crisp
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Thursday, May 14, 2009 - 09:38 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

crisp island winds
whisper catastrophics
of depressions

Next: tropical
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Posted on Friday, May 15, 2009 - 10:53 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Crystal clear water
Drinking beer on sandy beach
Tropical retreat.

Arctic
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Posted on Friday, May 15, 2009 - 11:58 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

a tempest’s mood swings
stirring the chilled emotions
of an arctic heart

Next: shudder
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Posted on Sunday, May 17, 2009 - 08:24 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

epitaphs composed
chiseled with mournful shudder
on pages of stone


Next: repose
Do not speak to me loudly so that I might hear you... speak to me softly so that I might listen.

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Posted on Thursday, May 21, 2009 - 06:32 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

heavens saturate
chartreuse canopy unfolds
winter in repose

craft
"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Friday, May 22, 2009 - 10:46 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

............Haikim ! :-)

haiku

glimmers of hope
in crystallized carbon
crafted by time

Next: charmed
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Posted on Sunday, May 24, 2009 - 07:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Listen to silence
Question monatary love
Leading a charmed life.

Sarcasm
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Sunday, May 24, 2009 - 11:12 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

sagacity bites
the incompetent waggings
of sarcasm’s tongue

Next: incisive
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Posted on Sunday, May 24, 2009 - 10:04 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

hai-ya back Randy

haiku

incisive force flows
under meandering guise
distance grants clear view

next: lore


"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Monday, May 25, 2009 - 01:07 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

generational
antediluvian rites
the allure of lore

Next: legacy
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Posted on Wednesday, May 27, 2009 - 03:39 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

self inflicted curse
passed to wombs of innocence
human legacy

haiku

spots fade in meadows
to mimic a feared landscape
legacy of fawns

sigh
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Friday, May 29, 2009 - 08:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

...........HaiApril :-)

Haiku

grey skies inhale
chilled clouds of winter’s breath
a season sighs

Next: Rime
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Posted on Sunday, May 31, 2009 - 04:14 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiku

December Morning
Rime of Jack Frost decorates
The distant mountain.

Risk
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Knightwriter
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Posted on Monday, June 01, 2009 - 04:28 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

.........Haitim, long time no see..

senryu

intimidation
risking power for force
overcomes itself

Next: defeated
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Posted on Monday, June 01, 2009 - 04:03 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Haiknight. . .Very busy couple of weeks. . .

Senryu

Deepening shadows
Swallowing will to survive
Defeated daylight.

Lacerate
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Posted on Wednesday, June 03, 2009 - 01:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Hia-back-at-chew-both

profound irony
sweet to tongues this bitter scar
tree's laceration

jut
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, June 04, 2009 - 05:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Cling to tomorrow
Weakened hold on yesterday
Jutting from morning.

Liberate
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Posted on Thursday, June 04, 2009 - 06:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku to you too

mute on arrival
glints and gleams jut through timber
bask, breathe, celebrate

quaint
"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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Posted on Thursday, June 04, 2009 - 06:24 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

woops.. didn't see you there Tim... sorry
"enjoy playing kissy-face with pain ...smile big"
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02l
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Posted on Thursday, June 04, 2009 - 05:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

. . .No problem. . .

Senryu

Retreating shadows
Argue with the rising sun
Quaint conversations.

Price
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Posted on Thursday, June 04, 2009 - 06:33 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

haiku

glowing saffron bloom
summer's reign liberates her
on borrowed time's price

sway



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Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 12:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Senryu

Sophistical sun
Regulating circles turn
Philosophic sway.

Advise
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Posted on Saturday, June 06, 2009 - 05:22 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

senryu

hearts pleading through prayer
demons wrapped in wool sent words
adversely advise

haiku

herds before advised
foraged knowledge passed each birth
beasts stride faithfully

gleam
Will I have to pay for that? Until we type again.... :P Apes
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Posted on Sunday, June 07, 2009 - 11:10 am: