CREATION ( Star Of David )
(Star of David)
He made the whole
Universe and formed man
The Bible doesn't explain where God just came from
But it says clear that He was always there
This is a mystery to me too
But I just believe,accept
God created all just perfect
In fact made us good and pure
Adam and Eve had wonderful lives
They ruled over everything God made
Adam just didn't have to work for a living
Didn't face pain or death
Till both did sin
Dorian Petersen Potter
The 'Star of David' is a new poetry
form created by Dorian Petersen Potter,
on October 22,2009.
This poetic concrete form consitst of 19 lines.
Rhyme is optional.This is left to the poet.
The syllable count for this format is as follows:
At the very top and going down and across, begin with thes number of syllables:
1,2,3,4,5 and then continuing down and across do 11,10,8,8,7,8,9,10, 11,5,4,3,2, and end with 1 syllable.
This form has to allign in the center, if you have done correctly the syllable count lines, you'll see and have a very pretty star shape. I decided to call it the ' Star of David' because that's what it looked like to me,after I've done it.
Subject: Spiritual, inspirational or uplifting in nature.
~Thank you for reading~
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