where lovers lai
what heart comes my way?
be it you, please say
me, do
one and one dare say:
make two, here we lay
me, you
our synchronized sway-
goes both night and day
us two
written for FOS challenge
Lai
552,552,552
=)
By mick green
© 2008 mick green
(All rights reserved) The poem above was written for the Form Over Substance Challenge
- we're reviewing forms with syllable requirements!
The poem above is one of the following types of poems:
Cinquain
Shadorma
Rictameter
Hexaduad
Huitain
Ethere
Lai
Sextilla
Rime Royale
Espinela
Cyrch A Chwta
Clogyrnach
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