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Lets take a topic: Sex before marriage

Idea pre existing: perfect night perfect hair, she stares into his eyes with all her luv without a cure[ similar words]


Pristine face
Perfect legs
He looks at her thinking bout how to go to bed
She thinks his fine
His looks have her driving over lines
She crosses her legs
A sign of grace
Opens them
as he says the magic words

I love you
Thats all it takes when your weakened by the view
I love you
Thats when living in the moment takes control of you

She thought it was truth
purity;Sold herself cheap
Waited less
Time was on her side
morning after she found that he'd left regret
Those words were the only memory he had left

I love you
Thats all it takes when your weakened by the view
I love you
Thats when living in the moment takes control of you

Words are cheap thats all she said

I love you
Thats all it takes when your weakened by the view
I love you
Thats when living in the moment takes control of you

By mik3y

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