MY TIMELESS LOVE
 

 


The corners and crossroads
I must go through
The road untaken I must capture
So you & me... can finally be
In the future of our rapture

Just like the whispers in the wind
Our love blows the cottonwood blooms
planted on the plains of our future
Through the doorways of eternity's rooms

Stuck somewhere between time and space
Our love always looms...

I am writing you this love letter
to tell you just how much...
I remember, though it was long ago
I was so sensitive to your touch

Do you remember our childhood days
When I kissed you at the public pool
It was the first kiss... of too young in love
And you blushed as we walked home from school

We frolicked in my tree-house
We played hide & seek
Yes, we were the best of friends
As we ran through our lives unique

We got a little older
We went to the dance at our school
Our Friday night drop-ins...
Made us feel so cool

Young love... it was budding
We shared all that we dreamed
Our future proclaimed in front of us
Like eternity it seemed

But then you moved away
Your family took you so far
I never thought I'd see you again
'Til I got older... and got my first car

I drove up North to see you
Up by that Golden Gate
I had searched so long... just to find you again
Seemed forever... would it be too late?

The corners and crossroads
I must go through
The road untaken I must capture
So you & me... can finally be
In the future of our rapture

Just like the whispers in the wind
Our love blows the cottonwood blooms
planted on the plains of our future
Through the doorways of eternity's rooms

Stuck somewhere between time and space
Our love always looms...

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~This poem is written in rhyming freestyle form~



This poem: 'My Timeless Love' was newly created
as a multiwrite
to enter the following challenges:

Simplicity: Corners And Crossroads... with: Kajuncutie

Free Verse: The Road Untaken... with: vikingbutterfly

Recalling Our Childhood Days... with: badmac

Love Letters... with: tinyteddy

FOS Any Form Goes: 'Just Like The Whispers In The Wind'... with: Marlys

AND... Between Time And Space:
'Stuck Somewhere Between Time And Space'...
with: Privatedancer

(This was just before they stopped allowing you
to enter your poem in more than one challenge.
All these challenges were going on simultaneously
and this poem did not win in any of them)



By C. Steven Blue

© 2008 C. Steven Blue (All rights reserved)

 

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