my infernal creep / lu's retort
 


...once again we join our lover's, Lu and Rosemary, for a look at love
...but this time the honeymoon is definitely over....



'oh Lu you cad, you left me here alone!
i knew that loving you would leave it's mark
from brain to heart to soul through skin and bone
long crave to feel your bite and hear your bark'

'but last we met in house by lake to dance
you offered up, my choice of partners take
so not so much of love , but lust's romance
that you, wish me, to writhe with she, partake'

'your hellish ways with women stands unchanged
these fantasies played-out infront of you
are such, you see, you come across deranged
how diabolical they sprout into'

'you understand? ...but it, your need, still keeps
shrinks not the size of my infernal creep!'


Lu's retort


'oh woman scorned, hell hath no fury like
i did you wrong, e'en as i did you right!
waste not my juice, but spit it back at me
and just be glad i leave you standing free

'i'm not unsure your kind are many more
exception always yes, ...will be replied
sweet Rosemary you could have used the door
but no, you chose and danced with she green-eyed'

'as i remember it, delightful giggles
and lots of sighs between the both of you
yet now your mind's resolve it twists and wriggles
so what betwixt the difference be true?'

'you know i hate to love you but ...i do
no other mortal woman calls me Lu!


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http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91053958.html

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By mick green

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