Got To Love The Sea
 

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Sea smells with sea
shells with salt in the air,
Stinky fish and the birds
just sh** in your hair

Stagnant breeze with the
humidity's on the rise,
The smell is so horrible it
brings tears to your eyes.

Can you smell it,just lingering
it takes your breath away,
Fish carcases laying around
guess it wasn't their lucky day.

Have you ever seen or smelled
a baking catfish in the sand,
Nostrils flaring,barely standing
your face you start to fan.

No use there's no help the
stench just blows your mind,
Bye,bye sea smells see you
later you weren't so very kind.

Next time I will bring a mask
if I get the nerve to come back,
This is one sea I won't miss
because of a smell it doesn't lack.


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Host:Creativity5363(Dorrie)
Theme:'sea smells'



By TinyTeddy

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