Through Rivers They Came
 
Over miles, through rivers they came
Speaking softly to me your name
The ghosts of tears you have shed
The lines of red you have bled
Darker than the reddest wine
Floods your heart cries into mine
Over miles, through rivers they came
Speaking softly to me your name





For: Floreann's 'your heart cries into mine' challenge
& FOS



By Paldera.O-Neel

© 2008 Paldera.O-Neel (All rights reserved)

 
The poem above was written for the Form Over Substance Challenge:

The Octelle, The syllable count structure for this verse is 8,
8, 7, 7, 7, 7, 8, 8! The rhyme scheme is
aa/bb/cc/aa. The first two lines and the last two lines are
identical.

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