Editing For Mass Consumption

Calibrating the consequences of
knee-jerk reaction
over the tides of time and toll.
Contemplating boundaries of
constricting redaction,
is less so inferior to the whole?
Cinching down on the flow of
voluminous verbosity,
seeking to maintain intensity.
Leaving just enough room
for rapt curiosity
rolled with a sound propensity.
Condensed coloration of thoughts
narrowly correlated
provide for ease to the eyes.
Final presentation trimmed and
clearly syncopated
yet not surreptitiously excised.
Submitted for the Brain Tease challenge
'ROSEABUDIN'
“BOUNDARIES”
By AlwaysMyWords
© 2012 AlwaysMyWords
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