The Fan
 



Soft soothing the sound
Whirling cooling yes it does
My mind starts to drift
Lying here thinking of you
Wishing you were here
Thinking of all the good times
Always brings a smile
Like the night when we made love
It was so perfect
You did everything so right
Entwined we so were
Suddenly I feel a chill
the fan so very soothing
Yet is so powerful

By dream poet dani

© 2005 dream poet dani (All rights reserved)

 
The Choka

The Choka is a traditional form of Japanese poetry that
alternates lines of 5 and 7 syllables. Unusually for Japanese
forms, the Choka can be a very long piece if so desired. The
poem is followed by a single additional line of 7 syllables,
called an envoi, which is usually a summary of the poem in a
single line. With this form, the poem is in effect an extended
Tanka, which has a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable structure. The difference
with Choka is that you can have as many alternating 5-7-5-7
lines as you like before the final 7 syllable line, but the poem
must always end with a 7 syllable line, plus the envoi of 7
syllables, so that the poem always has a couplet of two 7
syllable lines at the end.


There is no limit to number of lines as long as they follow the
5-7 syllable rule until the last three lines which would be 5-7-
7.

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